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Old 07-19-05, 01:26 PM   #1
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one mic & lyrical mage- gettin yo' speaker blastin'

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Me and mage, makin a name for ourselves, spittin wit passion
This is just normal 007 ready for action
Bustin my gat quick, always ready for war
Comin back well, like we need to settle the score
Lets sever these whores…. check out the methods I use
I hate people that get all jealous cuz im better than you
We ready for crews, step to me, you get battered and bruised
But im way off the scale, you cant measure my fuse
Can you see, the delightful way I flow to the beat
When we target wins, some herbs go for defeat
I’ve hurd people sayin they hot, when they rollin wit freaks
How you gonna cope, wit me and mage patrollin’ the streets??
Fuck the beef, all that work, for the guy to go and retreat
I aint wit that, so imma jus’ continue holdin the heat
We steppin up our game for this, so it aint basic
Some emcees think they hot, but they was jus’ stuck in the matrix
Face it ,we ace bitch, watch as I demonstrate this
Faithful, creation, threatenin different nations
Believe me, we bringin lyrics too hot for the T.V.
Battle either of us, you’ll have to “phone home”, just like E.T.

We believe in the hype, to battle us you need to be tite
Like Common, you best believe we both seein “the light”
Its one mic and lyrical mage, getting yo’ speaker blastin
I’d advise not to battle us, cuz it sparks a bad reaction (2X)

lyrical mage
time fo mage but the mics already started smoking
one mic just left and mcees already started choking
we a couple of niggas that just became yo resident
sending down flame storms onto yo little settlement
most mcees we come across know they lyrical fate
but some die horrificly cause they try to abnegate
yo crews abject...aw shit hes crying get a tissue
at least god havent killed you like he did abihu
im a hustler i addle niggas wit great comfusion
disapearin from the pigs is my other great Illusion
the booths on fire the mic melting wit blue flames
sparks fly as the heat start meltin yo crew brains
I send lyrical spells,like a abyss of firey hells
I put slugs in u that come out as empty shells
so start dodging my rhymes cause we aint faking
we the grim reaper and yo soul fo da taking

We believe in the hype, to battle us you need to be tite
Like Common, you best believe we both seein “the light”
Its one mic and lyrical mage, getting yo’ speaker blastin
I’d advise not to battle us, cuz it sparks a bad reaction (2X)
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Old 07-19-05, 01:34 PM   #2
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Old 07-19-05, 03:25 PM   #3
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uppin on this ringht here
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Old 07-20-05, 01:25 PM   #4
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uppin this shit...
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Old 07-20-05, 09:56 PM   #5
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tight on this its off the chain
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Old 07-21-05, 01:20 PM   #6
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thanx for the feed legend. uppin this shit..................
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Old 07-21-05, 03:47 PM   #7
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c'mon people lets get sum feed on this shit.......
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Old 07-22-05, 10:12 AM   #8
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uppinnnnnnn.....................
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Old 07-22-05, 01:43 PM   #9
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uppin fo them yall
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Old 07-22-05, 03:13 PM   #10
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one mic...ur flow is good...and ur rhyme scheme is stock = good...but, throw a few twists in there every now and then


2nd cat...not bad...but ur verse lacked a clear direction and some complecity with rhyming...add some multi syllables


not bad

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Old 07-22-05, 03:23 PM   #11
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ayo it was tight homie both need a lil work on vocab by twisting it wit some unique shit but besides that homie it was good keep it up holla for another collab homies?!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-22-05, 03:37 PM   #12
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thanx for the feed Q and Optik. yer man im always down for collabs, jus' hit me up and im in.
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Old 07-22-05, 04:15 PM   #13
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ayo RTF on my OM on the bottom of my sig homie its called out in the open..............
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Old 07-22-05, 04:16 PM   #14
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ayo also RTF on my battles homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!peace
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Old 07-23-05, 07:42 AM   #15
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thanx for the feed O. uppin this.......................
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