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damn you talk alot of shit but after reading this you could prolly back it up cause this was nice an original
good vocab liked the flow liked the creativity i enjoyed it i give it the highest i ever gave anybody for there OM i give it a 9.8/10 Can you R/F in one of my battles and eplain your vote it will be much appreciated |
this is like ras kas..I like the story.....esp. this
~Straight from a bottomless pit,....Birthed from a army of six Spawned a problem within,...A dark consceince that sinned He promised hes sick, So twisted he'd spit an vomit on kids He's like a glitch in a document print, Makin the copier shift Harnesting the darkest of sins,...This kid is obviously a prick Everyone wishin he'd prolly just quit, but his pain is ageless Contained and sacred, His brain is basically based on hatred If he keeps pacing his frame he'd break it, his face is greyish He's just another face thats nameless, This lame's just basic His rage is caged in, It's outragous, how hes stays insane an Slaved to hatred, He paints the pages, that'll end his chapter So he trys to repente to pastors, clearin the sins he raptured But It just doesn't happen,...As quick as he did the bad work So now hes pissed an badgured, Wishing he did it backwards But hes to bussy dishin bad words, constantly dissin rappers Always from distant platforms, mixtures of evil hurt em badly Diffirent of people murked em nasty,he derserv'd the act see Actually worse then that heat,... But now his words are fancy Hes worth the happy, so he got baptise on a church's balcony~ ^^^this was a really good drop,10/10^^^ 1st verse was nice...Really nice... *Another rapper gone, vanished,captured by his own lyrics Shattered his own spirit, what kinda disasterous soul is this When every pastor an pope fears it? ^^10/10...that was deep,made me read it twice...^^^ |
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