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Voted For: GêÑ触§
lol . . . ok genesis i have to give it to you because of your closer . . . and the vocab . . .:i stop yo' 'embryonic' rhymes from maturing like an abortion man, whoever said i was this good wasn't blowing shit out of proportion: i like that i thought ur opening was weak tho and you could have done much better. . . :u scared of me like i was Hitler & u was Jewish i'm so heavy, my shadow comes in 3-D: i thought this line was played but still an "ok" punch definitly need to elevate . . . but overall good use of wordplay and pretty creative. . . keep writitng . . . v/Genesis |
Voted For: GêÑ触§
vote_ Genesis u had a good flow and good imagination yo punches we're str8 and unstandable yo weak line was yo' umbrella can't save u as rhymes rain down like a raging storm yo dopest lines was i stop yo' 'embryonic' rhymes from maturing like an abortion man, whoever said i was this good wasn't blowing shit out of proportion! dat was strong and bold but dont extend yo lines ta far |
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