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Problem Child 0 0%
GêÑ触§ 5 100.00%
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Old 08-02-05, 11:36 AM   #1
GêÑ触§
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From: Cuyahoga Falls, Ohio
Problem Child vs GêÑ触§

IP: 0825 899A

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Old 08-02-05, 11:37 AM   #2
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Old 08-02-05, 11:38 AM   #3
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Problem Child, u can't withstand my punches like Tyson's recent form
yo' umbrella can't save u as rhymes rain down like a raging storm
i ain't letting go of tha mic; i keep my arm strong like Louis
u scared of me like i was Hitler & u was Jewish
i'm so heavy, my shadow comes in 3-D
leave yo' in shock with yo' face blue like a scene at tha PD
i stop yo' 'embryonic' rhymes from maturing like an abortion
man, whoever said i was this good wasn't blowing shit out of proportion!
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Old 08-02-05, 11:40 AM   #4
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Old 08-02-05, 11:46 AM   #5
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Yo imma true~Nigga~so yes thats meanz imma have
2 murda this fuckin~WIGGA~//Listen imma rip u like a
paper from a~NOTEBOOK~like when u step up 2 tha plate u have 2~CHOKE~UP~//i don't even have 2
~SLAY~ya verse like a lil kid im jus gonna play wit~WORDS~u gonna love me when im finished wit
~YOU~u might az well go 2 tha gay~NUDE~//im gonna kill ya~BITCH~so yes thats meanz imma have 2 hit tha
~MAJOR~SWITCH~//my ryhmes will eat u up like lil~MAGGOTS~sum 1 drop tha soap fo dis internet~FAGGOT~//
 
Old 08-02-05, 12:25 PM   #6
Kamze
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Voted For: GêÑ触§

v/Genesis

I thought he had better punchlines and original material

Problem child- Good but i wasn't getting your lyrics and they didn't hit as hard as Genesis
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Old 08-02-05, 03:20 PM   #7
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wtf damn we need votes uppiiiin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 08-02-05, 03:46 PM   #8
QuadID
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Voted For: GêÑ触§

you got him with all the rhymes and the word play
he was too...sudden about what he was going to say(ex. lines 5 to 8)
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Old 08-02-05, 03:54 PM   #9
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iight im 0-2 bitches keep tha damn votes kumin uppinnnnnn
 
Old 08-02-05, 03:57 PM   #10
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need fuckin votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!
 
Old 08-02-05, 04:23 PM   #11
GêÑ触§
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IP: 3240 794D

when does the voting end ike after how many votes or days does it close?
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Old 08-02-05, 05:00 PM   #12
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i think when u get 5 votes thats when u win p.s upppinn need votes
 
Old 08-02-05, 10:13 PM   #13
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upinn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!fo vote plz!!!!!!!!
 
Old 08-02-05, 10:16 PM   #14
Journal!st
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This was feedback posted for GêÑ触§

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just checkin pollz man both were good but not too sound better but ya'll need better metaz and child i told ya fix ya structure people get lost readin ya shit and we lose interest man real.....
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Old 08-02-05, 10:18 PM   #15
Rile1
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From: Hayward, CA
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Voted For: GêÑ触§

Problem ur structure and flow sucked major ass and really ur punches were newbish, try not to talk about gay, sex, moms, or guns man u need to be creative, read some battle to fix ur structure..Gen u messed up ur structure in the middle but u had good punches which gave u the win...V/Gen for better punches and structure
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