Problem Child vs GêÑ触§
Battle Rules:
6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-02-05 at 12:06 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
GêÑ触§ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 11:37 AM.
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Problem Child, u can't withstand my punches like Tyson's recent form
yo' umbrella can't save u as rhymes rain down like a raging storm i ain't letting go of tha mic; i keep my arm strong like Louis u scared of me like i was Hitler & u was Jewish i'm so heavy, my shadow comes in 3-D leave yo' in shock with yo' face blue like a scene at tha PD i stop yo' 'embryonic' rhymes from maturing like an abortion man, whoever said i was this good wasn't blowing shit out of proportion! |
Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 11:40 AM.
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Yo imma true~Nigga~so yes thats meanz imma have
2 murda this fuckin~WIGGA~//Listen imma rip u like a paper from a~NOTEBOOK~like when u step up 2 tha plate u have 2~CHOKE~UP~//i don't even have 2 ~SLAY~ya verse like a lil kid im jus gonna play wit~WORDS~u gonna love me when im finished wit ~YOU~u might az well go 2 tha gay~NUDE~//im gonna kill ya~BITCH~so yes thats meanz imma have 2 hit tha ~MAJOR~SWITCH~//my ryhmes will eat u up like lil~MAGGOTS~sum 1 drop tha soap fo dis internet~FAGGOT~// |
Voted For: GêÑ触§
v/Genesis I thought he had better punchlines and original material Problem child- Good but i wasn't getting your lyrics and they didn't hit as hard as Genesis |
wtf damn we need votes uppiiiin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: GêÑ触§
you got him with all the rhymes and the word play he was too...sudden about what he was going to say(ex. lines 5 to 8) |
iight im 0-2 bitches keep tha damn votes kumin uppinnnnnn
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need fuckin votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !! :banghead:
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when does the voting end ike after how many votes or days does it close?
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i think when u get 5 votes thats when u win p.s upppinn need votes :shoot:
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upinn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!fo vote plz!!!!!!!!
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This was feedback posted for GêÑ触§
just checkin pollz man both were good but not too sound better but ya'll need better metaz and child i told ya fix ya structure people get lost readin ya shit and we lose interest man real.....
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Voted For: GêÑ触§
Problem ur structure and flow sucked major ass and really ur punches were newbish, try not to talk about gay, sex, moms, or guns man u need to be creative, read some battle to fix ur structure..Gen u messed up ur structure in the middle but u had good punches which gave u the win...V/Gen for better punches and structure |
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