this was ok, yall should have picked better colors tho i can't even see 2fast2furious's piece. but overall it was decent. structure and flow were both good. maybe work on puttin some more metas in there. Niggaplease had the better verse to me but 2f2f was ok too. There was alot of imagery in here tho which bumps the quality of the piece up for this type of Open Mic'. 7.5/10
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nplease not that bad u could have came up witha better topic though car crash nah come up with something creative ur flow and vocab are good work on ur structure and creativity a bit
and 2fast2furious i dont know lol im not reading that yellow it hurts my eyes

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This was preety good piece,Both had good verses,the structures were ok and i think ya worked preety well with eachother 8/10
Keep rapping both of ya....1....

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Aiight Piece Here Yo. Rhyme Scheme Was Nice On NP's Side..Structure Was Nice As Well 2Fast Had Some Emotion In Here Nice Imagery From Both Was Good Keep This Up For Really.
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structure was ok but niggaplease had a betta verse do t vocab

^man this shit is mad old lmao...i remember when i wrote this....but i changed my name since....
and i had a better verse cause of vocab? how bout my multis or structure? i could care less who had the better verse....i would want to know.....the breakdown of both verses...just ur lesson on how to give proper feedback