Excellent concept first of all, the ending reminds me of a piece I once wrote.

You worked it out very nicely, speaking on several aspects of being an angel and how they are perceived by mortals. The imagery was great, you used clear pictures to describe the theory in your words. The emotion was there as well, focusing on the tears and the pain of the angels, how they are not appreciated and such. The vocab was on point, had a good complexity to it all, flow was good!

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Emotion was dope..Loved it
Complexity was nice....Loved it
Flow was Good..Loved it
Vocab Was nice...Loved it

Overall....9.5/10....DOPE shit man..keep it up...

thanks buddy...

my OM will be better :shoot:

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good flow, good read and good vocab ill give it a 9/10

Prettty sweet dude... 8/10 no doubt