This was alright.

The beat was ok and i don't think the singing was as bad as everyone says, it wasn't great but it didn't kill the chorus. Does remind me of akon. First verse needs work. Not just quality of the sound but quality of the lyrics. Step up on the mic and go at it like you believe what you sayin is the realest shit. Verse was kinda wack. no hate

Second verse was good...that's all i can really say about it. Quality was good. Lyrics were alright. Flo was cool. Up the first rappers skills a lil and i'd say you have a real force here

6/10

we're in the process of getting my real vocals up on there
(the sucky verse)

i wunt talk about blays quality...cos mine aint any better...anyways feeling the beat like heeeeeeellll...its tight..implicit i liked his verse...nice flow from both sides....but when i heard the hook iwas like :wtf: ...lol the 2 voices didnt concord to me....cool track anyways :thumbup:

who's singin? is that akon cuz it sounds bad for akon

yea your quality aint that great, your flow si a little to flow, try and speed it up man, emotion i cant tell really until your quality is a lil better. lyrics weren't to bad. i believe the 2nd cat is implicit, his quality is a little bit better, flow kinda shaky, his voice is meh and you can till hes young lol. but potential from both to be somin good.

maybe yall gonna need para to feature on a track sometime:thumbup:

can yall rtf here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209869

^still tell I'm young? well im 17. i dont think thats too young. but thanks for the feed and we will return the pavor.