Props to Lady Fiya for mixin this for me, wit the noise reduction and all that.

thanks.

www.soundclick.com/Paranoid05

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2460155
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2460183

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lol...aww makes me think soft...nice flow..it kinna seemed u were counting ur flows tho...but fuck that u went smooth on this...you worded ur aim out...clear concept and stuff...cool piece right here...i like it...

*sings* aint no body love me like u do...


lol...anyways hit mine...link below


wun

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Listening:
Beat is cool seriously, now i know what type of beats you like, quality is soso but still good, no hiss so its good, nice flow seriously, i admit this is your best, put more emotions to it, nice lil voice chorus, lyrics were simple but still a nice kinda love story, overall this is your best track, oh and btw i like your voice, keep them droping
7.5/10

anotha dabatos sing-songy beat


lol @ "yea...UH...UH"...sounded so robotic...let loose wit it like..YEA...ughhhhh ughhhhhhhhh


ur lyrics aren't bad...but ur flow was robotic...


relax on the mic

feel natural

ur voice is kinda deepish


but the yea and ughs are killin me


lol


u've elevated though

and did u say "Q was on ur mind 24/7?"

OH..."YOU" were on my mind

ahhh gotcha!


nice track


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lmfao Q, im trying to work out my sound, i dont think i sound robotic but i do agree that yea and uh is really annoying. it would be better if i showed it ebtter but im really likin this.

thanks for the feed
uppin

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that beat was fire...thats a common type of beat...lol funny cuz he's in ya sig... ya quality aint too great shoulda turned up a vocals up a lil more...ya flow aint too bad.....voice is cool.....this song aint bad....keep um coming....7/10 keep um coming

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My Music HOE

really feelin the beat.....

yea definitely relax on the mic more....you kinda seem like your a lil tight up.....

you gotta pretty good voice...i think once you get your delivery and presence down...your voice will really compliment everything.....

lyrics are good.......

delivery is def better than last track....but you still gotta work on it....and your emotion on this track should be upped a lil bit too......

overall this is your best....still some things you def gotta work on.......flow being first IMO....then everything will come after that........just keep elevating.....decent song man

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yo Jroy this aint a common beats its a Nas beat lol

anyway thanks for the feedback.

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uppin..........

leave links yall.

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uppin...........

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yea like some of the others said your flow is mad robotic...its nice flow but your all robotic an ish....you lack emotions i felt, i think you coulda used more emotion an sounded mad monotone too...but on a good note, it was smooth .. just felt you could have improved on it a lil...1

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Will soon b off wit my rap career....so if yall wanna rememba me...want my 'signature?'

thanks uppin....

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decent beat, kinda over-used now tho... lets take a listen, mixin is ok, too much noise reduction its taken away from ur natural vocal sound... yeh alot of mixin issues... flow is ok, could be alot better, ur lackin presence and emotion.... lyrics are ok.

the same comments apply for all verses basically... keep at it fam

btw returnin the favour, link in my sig