Wha?
 

Well from my point of view it needs improving don't be acting like you the freshest thing since Will Smith...A i ain't schooling you...if i was then u'd know about it...it's called feedback...and if you THINK...you don't need elevation...then you're disillusioned bruv...appreciate the way you rap...but i'm saying there is still room for improvment...

oh i have officially now placed you in my ignorant rapper box along with CarsonJet, C.A.L.I & Bro Yao...well done

the chipmunk symnphony was funny

lol

Beat:I normally like chipmunk effects...but this beat made my head hurt
Flow: DQ...generic voice withflow...and POPs in ur mic..watch dat...more emotion needed
Rhyming:
Delivery:**as stated above...more emotion...and that poppin is fuckin my speakers up
and it sounds like ur jus reading ur lyrics...put some ATTITUDE in them


**fish in the sea line stood out**


Chief...ur flow sounded good on here...interesting voice

DQ...elevate....CHIEF...wud like to hear more from u


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Overall:

Thanks for constructive feed...