Originally Posted by KriZ

Aiight....

Ayo, Kriz is comin at defined wit new hard rhymes/
ya better think quik aiight? cuz u runnin outta time/
sorry, but "i'm dissin u" doesnt count as a diss
This bitch is going to be first to die in tha front line/
Hit him so hard all tha time now he litterally blind/
stretched, the "all tha time now" part is really unnecessary
and he tryna think of somethin but this masta mind/
stopped him dead in his trax, all ways claimin he got gats/
u betta prove that if ur gonna say it, otherwise its jus another fake personal
but i dont see shit besides plastic super soakers/
Now wat bitch u dumbfounded? Rip out his intestines/
doesnt rhyme, more fake personals, n ur the one threatenin violence, not him
Pass em around 2 ppl 2 sho wat'll happen, wit instincts/*
Man fuck you, bitch you gonna die and rot motha fucker.
also doesnt rhyme, n needs the explanation 2 mean nethin, which aint good

overall: weak, basically everythin i sed in my line comments

Originally Posted by defined

get with it kid and understand illusions fully
your sig a target RED...
..........feel Punch Horns across u ruley Bull-es
[b]a bit stretched, but good concept
your testaments on hold dish out grand jury
grand fury kriz ultimative to leave in a hurry
ok...
don figit..breathe..relax..0-0 remeber 1 digit
the 1st mutilated rubber duck for all in Xzibit
nice punch
your concepts = Old & Tired not one is Bustin
must be becuze your life...
........only revoloves around all Virgin Rustins
set up really hits after i just finished reading his verse
las check rubber ducks weren symbol fighters
for fags Ringin the tup guess you dialed biters
rubber duck thing is already used, n ur not buildin on it much
not a very good closing

overall: decent verse, some good punches
much better then kriz's