Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
10 min to check
30 to drop
house
blind

Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 10-16-05 at 09:21 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

KriZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-05 09:07 PM.

Defined has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-05 09:13 PM.

Aiight....

Ayo, Kriz is comin at defined wit new hard rhymes/
ya better think quik aiight? cuz u runnin outta time/
This bitch is going to be first to die in tha front line/
Hit him so hard all tha time now he litterally blind/
and he tryna think of somethin but this masta mind/
stopped him dead in his trax, all ways claimin he got gats/
but i dont see shit besides plastic super soakers/
Now wat bitch u dumbfounded? Rip out his intestines/
Pass em around 2 ppl 2 sho wat'll happen, wit instincts/*
Man fuck you, bitch you gonna die and rot motha fucker.

Quik shit so yeah.

*- My instincts told me to rip him up basically.

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Please only well explained votes....and if you dont understand the wordplay or personals dont vote

get with it kid and understand illusions fully
your sig a target RED...
..........feel Punch Horns across u ruley Bull-es
your testaments on hold dish out grand jury
grand fury kriz ultimative to leave in a hurry
don figit..breathe..relax..0-0 remeber 1 digit
the 1st mutilated rubber duck for all in Xzibit
your concepts = Old & Tired not one is Bustin
must be becuze your life...
........only revoloves around all Virgin Rustins
las check rubber ducks weren symbol fighters
for fags Ringin the tup guess you dialed biters

blah

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Good verse, i guess u like my rubber duck avy huh? Lol. Uppin on votes ppl.

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uppin 1...........................................

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Voted For: Defined

Wordplay- Defined.
Complexity- Defined.
Punches- Defined.

V/ Defined.

Reason- Well, pretty much he won every category by reasonable amount.. His punches hit harder even tho some missed. He had some werdplay attempts as well..

Kriz- You should try to think of some harder punches and include meta's/ similes in your punches cos they help strengthen them..
Also fix up ya rhyme scheme cos in the super soakers bar it didnt rhyme.. Well stay up homies.

Return the Favor- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211798

P'z..

I'll get 2 it later.... Im still working on my punches tho. Uppin on votes

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aight thanks uppin for more explained votes.......

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Voted For: Defined

Defined

get with it kid and understand illusions fully
your sig a target RED...
..........feel Punch Horns across u ruley Bull-es
Forced..
your testaments on hold dish out grand jury
grand fury kriz ultimative to leave in a hurry
Nah..
don figit..breathe..relax..0-0 remeber 1 digit
the 1st mutilated rubber duck for all in Xzibit
Decent..
your concepts = Old & Tired not one is Bustin
must be becuze your life...
........only revoloves around all Virgin Rustins
Didn't connect..
las check rubber ducks weren symbol fighters
for fags Ringin the tup guess you dialed biters
Pretty decent..

KriZ

Ayo, Kriz is comin at defined wit new hard rhymes/
ya better think quik aiight? cuz u runnin outta time/
Not worded into a punch..
This bitch is going to be first to die in tha front line/
Hit him so hard all tha time now he litterally blind/
Not a punch..
and he tryna think of somethin but this masta mind/
stopped him dead in his trax, all ways claimin he got gats/
Why did you fuck up your rhyme scheme? Not a punch anyway.
but i dont see shit besides plastic super soakers/
Doesn't rhyme with anything.
Now wat bitch u dumbfounded? Rip out his intestines/
Pass em around 2 ppl 2 sho wat'll happen, wit instincts/
Intestines and Instincts don't rhyme.. not a punch..

Overall, Defined came with a pretty lackluster verse with only 2 decent punches. But, KriZ didn't come with any remotely decent lines. His rhyme scheme went to shit about half way through, and it just didn't work out for him. He didn't word his lines into punches, so when it comes down to it.. Defined gets my vote. He at least had punches and a few them came out decent.

Vote - Defined

Both of you should sign up for the Punchline League.. you'll elevate pretty fast there. It's a good opportunity for you to battle without messing up your record.

aight thanks uppin for explained votes.................

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Voted For: Defined

Kriz-Your verse was ok, nothing special at alllll..you had good flow man..ill give you that...your structure was exceptional...and your punches....werent really that hard hitting..you had more self glore...or some fascination with your name.....overall 5/10

Defined-Your verse was meh, nothing special...but you had less self glore than your opponent you had good flow and ideas/wordplay........ummm your punches were weak...yet they were still present....overall 6/10

v/defined

rtf in a couple of days wen my battle is up...1

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

Voted For: Defined

Ayo, Kriz is comin at defined wit new hard rhymes/
ya better think quik aiight? cuz u runnin outta time/
0....didn't diss the oppenent...seemed more like a threat.
This bitch is going to be first to die in tha front line/
Hit him so hard all tha time now he litterally blind/
0...same as previous bar.
and he tryna think of somethin but this masta mind/
stopped him dead in his trax, all ways claimin he got gats/
0...this bar didn't rhyme...and no punch,again
but i dont see shit besides plastic super soakers/
Now wat bitch u dumbfounded? Rip out his intestines/
0...threats...and didn't rhyme.
Pass em around 2 ppl 2 sho wat'll happen, wit instincts/*
Man fuck you, bitch you gonna die and rot motha fucker.
0...threats...again.

get with it kid and understand illusions fully
your sig a target RED...
..........feel Punch Horns across u ruley Bull-es
4...meh...ite.
your testaments on hold dish out grand jury
grand fury kriz ultimative to leave in a hurry
0....no punch,just babbling.
don figit..breathe..relax..0-0 remeber 1 digit
the 1st mutilated rubber duck for all in Xzibit
1....weak.
your concepts = Old & Tired not one is Bustin
must be becuze your life...
........only revoloves around all Virgin Rustins
3..well,at least it dissed.
las check rubber ducks weren symbol fighters
for fags Ringin the tup guess you dialed biters
3...bah.....you still won.

kriz..
tht verse you posted was awful,honestly.In a battle,your sopposed to diss/clown/demean the oppenent.Sayin they runnin outta time,or ur'll kill them,does NOT diss the oppenent in any way at all.So stop with the threats and start wit the punches.
Defined.
also a weak verse from you...but u at least dissed...so...you win.

Vote-Defined
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