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This was feedback posted for one mic
good verse bro. I like ya style
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thanx Tie-D, you my boi yo. uppin this................
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Voted For: one mic
One Mic: its obvious to see, im killin you, watch me bomb this you and and your wackness will always produce conflict iight punch - 4/10 like house of pain i get the crowd jumpin the only thing you bringin in rap is shame to brooklyn Not Good - 2/10 im spittin raw, cant get a real girl, so you lickin whores conflicts like a bad restaurant, cuz there aint no point in givin more* Meh - 3/10 like destiny's child, man, your outta breath its obvious to see your avatar symbolises lyrical death Played - 2/10 11/50 You had a good opener, and the flow was decent. ~Conflict~: How u got me battlin a kid from UK/ Ima smash’em,trashem take his last mic away/ ok punches - 3/10 Dis kid don’t know wat he doin that he fukin wit Brooklyn/ “Go Home Bitch ” cause that’s the only trip ull be bookin/ iight - 5/10 he thinks he could beat something that fukin I created/ they count his mic as “deadly” so bad to be confiscated/ ok - 4/10 Ima leave this kid finished with his corpse diminished/ This dog is sick ima put him to sleep like vetinarian clinics/ ok punch - 5/10 17/50 You had a good flow, and some punches that hit hard. Vote - Conflict Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: one mic
How u got me battlin a kid from UK/ Ima smash’em,trashem take his last mic away/ ^^^weak opener Dis kid don’t know wat he doin that he fukin wit Brooklyn/ “Go Home Bitch ” cause that’s the only trip ull be bookin/ ^^^NO punch he thinks he could beat something that fukin I created/ they count his mic as “deadly” so bad to be confiscated/ ^^^Weak Ima leave this kid finished with his corpse diminished/ This dog is sick ima put him to sleep like vetinarian clinics/ ^^^Ight closer its obvious to see, im killin you, watch me bomb this you and and your wackness will always produce conflict ^^^ight opener like house of pain i get the crowd jumpin the only thing you bringin in rap is shame to brooklyn ^^^Ok....not worded right im spittin raw, cant get a real girl, so you lickin whores conflicts like a bad restaurant, cuz there aint no point in givin more* ^^^good like destiny's child, man, your outta breath its obvious to see your avatar symbolises lyrical death ^^^Ight closer V/one mic this was a onesided battle con u came wit a weak verse no real punchs or wordplay also no good personals.....one u came wit a good solid verse that was consistent u get my vote..... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=215277 ^^^RTF Honestly....OR THis Vote will be removed |
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Voted For: one mic
............... one mic - its obvious to see, im killin you, watch me bomb this you and and your wackness will always produce conflict - Not hard by any means, but ok like house of pain i get the crowd jumpin the only thing you bringin in rap is shame to brooklyn - Personal and ok im spittin raw, cant get a real girl, so you lickin whores conflicts like a bad restaurant, cuz there aint no point in givin more* - Not workin like destiny's child, man, your outta breath its obvious to see your avatar symbolises lyrical death - This is ok for a finisher Your verse flowed well throughout, rhyming was fine with use of multis at times...you had lines that were ok for a battle, but limitied creativity.... ~Conflict~ How u got me battlin a kid from UK/ Ima smash’em,trashem take his last mic away/ - Big no... Dis kid don’t know wat he doin that he fukin wit Brooklyn/ “Go Home Bitch ” cause that’s the only trip ull be bookin/ - No he thinks he could beat something that fukin I created/ they count his mic as “deadly” so bad to be confiscated/ - Not really, why 'deadly'? Your backfiring.... Ima leave this kid finished with his corpse diminished/ This dog is sick ima put him to sleep like vetinarian clinics/ - So sweet that you want to put him to sleep...is he 'sick'? this backfired big time...plus the word you were looking for was veterinarian.... Your verse was all over the place lyrically...no line would be considered ok, and some of your lines were shooting bullets back at you....you need to improve on making your lines witty and really attacking the opponent....read your lines like they are someone else's and rate them, try something else if one of them doesn't work...you sound new, so read verses of others that are better and keep tryin... Ok this battle was comfortably won by one mic....better lines, attacking the opponent more...Stay Up Both This is my battle: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216087 |
thanx for the vote man, appreciate it. uppin for more votes........
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