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~Conflict~ 2 28.57%
one mic 5 71.43%
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 11-02-05, 05:13 PM   #1
J.D
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From: UK
one mic vs ~Conflict~

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Old 11-02-05, 05:14 PM   #2
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one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-05 05:14 PM.
 
Old 11-02-05, 05:26 PM   #3
J.D
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From: UK
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its obvious to see, im killin you, watch me bomb this
you and and your wackness will always produce conflict
like house of pain i get the crowd jumpin
the only thing you bringin in rap is shame to brooklyn
im spittin raw, cant get a real girl, so you lickin whores
conflicts like a bad restaurant, cuz there aint no point in givin more*
like destiny's child, man, your outta breath
its obvious to see your avatar symbolises lyrical death

*-in bad restaurants, you dont normally give tips, and the other meanin of when i say "givin more" is that i dont have to give more effort than usual to beat him.

quick 10 min verse. no hate..........
 
Old 11-02-05, 05:37 PM   #4
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~Conflict~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-05 05:37 PM.
 
Old 11-02-05, 05:58 PM   #5
~Conflict~
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From: brooklyn!
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How u got me battlin a kid from UK/
Ima smash’em,trashem take his last mic away/
Dis kid don’t know wat he doin that he fukin wit Brooklyn/
“Go Home Bitch ” cause that’s the only trip ull be bookin/
he thinks he could beat something that fukin I created/
they count his mic as “deadly” so bad to be confiscated/
Ima leave this kid finished with his corpse diminished/
This dog is sick ima put him to sleep like vetinarian clinics/
 
Old 11-02-05, 06:29 PM   #6
J.D
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nice verse...........uppin this...................
 
Old 11-03-05, 11:15 AM   #7
J.D
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uppin............................................. ..
 
Old 11-03-05, 03:43 PM   #8
J.D
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......................uppin.......................
 
Old 11-03-05, 04:37 PM   #9
noname
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Voted For: one mic

One Mic

Well,you had some decent punches.I Liked your first bar,with the conflict nameplay.The restaurant line was wack though.Seemed to complex.I understand what you were saying,but still...just get to the point with your punches.Aviod explaining your punches in the future.And don't make punches on avys anymore,their just boring nowadays.

Conflict


Ok,you had a choppy flow in your verse,That 1st bar was stretched out too much,making it flow bad.And it also wasn't a punch.Saying you'll smash 'em,trash 'em,and take his mic away doesn't diss.And your last bar,wit the sleep/vet clinic thingy....PLAYED OUT.

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Old 11-03-05, 05:42 PM   #10
Legend
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This was feedback posted for ~Conflict~

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you one mic you got this son you got this another god doing it big fasho
 
Old 11-03-05, 05:43 PM   #11
Legend
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i mean the feedback is for one mic sorry cuz but conflict you suck
 
Old 11-03-05, 06:35 PM   #12
J.D
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thanx legend man. uppin this shit....................
 
Old 11-04-05, 12:47 PM   #13
J.D
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...........uppin..................................
 
Old 11-04-05, 06:07 PM   #14
IXX 9 Tenths XXI
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This was feedback posted for ~Conflict~

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lol conflicts you faggot just cuz ur my boi i cant vote so ima say all together it was ight for both try harder
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Old 11-05-05, 04:45 AM   #15
J.D
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k thanx for the feed. uppin for votes...................
 
 


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