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J.D 11-02-05 05:13 PM

one mic vs ~Conflict~
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-02-05 at 05:43 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 11-02-05 05:14 PM

one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-05 05:14 PM.

J.D 11-02-05 05:26 PM

its obvious to see, im killin you, watch me bomb this
you and and your wackness will always produce conflict
like house of pain i get the crowd jumpin
the only thing you bringin in rap is shame to brooklyn
im spittin raw, cant get a real girl, so you lickin whores
conflicts like a bad restaurant, cuz there aint no point in givin more*
like destiny's child, man, your outta breath
its obvious to see your avatar symbolises lyrical death

*-in bad restaurants, you dont normally give tips, and the other meanin of when i say "givin more" is that i dont have to give more effort than usual to beat him.

quick 10 min verse. no hate..........

System 11-02-05 05:37 PM

~Conflict~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-05 05:37 PM.

~Conflict~ 11-02-05 05:58 PM

How u got me battlin a kid from UK/
Ima smash’em,trashem take his last mic away/
Dis kid don’t know wat he doin that he fukin wit Brooklyn/
“Go Home Bitch ” cause that’s the only trip ull be bookin/
he thinks he could beat something that fukin I created/
they count his mic as “deadly” so bad to be confiscated/
Ima leave this kid finished with his corpse diminished/
This dog is sick ima put him to sleep like vetinarian clinics/

J.D 11-02-05 06:29 PM

nice verse...........uppin this...................

J.D 11-03-05 11:15 AM

uppin............................................. ..

J.D 11-03-05 03:43 PM

......................uppin.......................

noname 11-03-05 04:37 PM

Voted For: one mic

One Mic

Well,you had some decent punches.I Liked your first bar,with the conflict nameplay.The restaurant line was wack though.Seemed to complex.I understand what you were saying,but still...just get to the point with your punches.Aviod explaining your punches in the future.And don't make punches on avys anymore,their just boring nowadays.

Conflict


Ok,you had a choppy flow in your verse,That 1st bar was stretched out too much,making it flow bad.And it also wasn't a punch.Saying you'll smash 'em,trash 'em,and take his mic away doesn't diss.And your last bar,wit the sleep/vet clinic thingy....PLAYED OUT.

Vote-One Mic

Drop a vote in one of the battles in my sig,

Legend 11-03-05 05:42 PM

This was feedback posted for ~Conflict~
 
you one mic you got this son you got this another god doing it big fasho

Legend 11-03-05 05:43 PM

i mean the feedback is for one mic sorry cuz but conflict you suck

J.D 11-03-05 06:35 PM

thanx legend man. uppin this shit....................

J.D 11-04-05 12:47 PM

...........uppin..................................

IXX 9 Tenths XXI 11-04-05 06:07 PM

This was feedback posted for ~Conflict~
 
lol conflicts you faggot just cuz ur my boi i cant vote so ima say all together it was ight for both try harder

J.D 11-05-05 04:45 AM

k thanx for the feed. uppin for votes...................


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