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I saw you were complaining but your losin sight of your goal. anyone can rhyme,(well not anyone) but you gotta come with a good punch or personal or something. Play on his name, use a metaphor or simile, be complex
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LMFAO. I didn't even see this. But man, shut the fuck up. My punches > yours. My personals > yours. My wordplay > yours. Quit whining about it. |
Voted For: Mimesis
Pretty one sided Battle. Mimeses had harder punches and lines that actually made sense. And kept his line about the same length so it flowed alot easier. Poetics,your whole flow was mad forced and stretched. Just keep it short and simple,cuz when im readin it i get confused as fuck about what is supposed to rhyme where and shit. So you need some elevation. I vot Mim. And stop picking on little people,battle me. |
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