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Poetics 0 0%
Mimesis 5 100.00%
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Old 11-10-05, 05:17 PM   #1
Magic5
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From: Denver, CO
Poetics vs Mimesis

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Old 11-10-05, 08:14 PM   #2
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Poetics has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-05 08:14 PM.
 
Old 11-11-05, 01:57 AM   #3
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Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-05 01:57 AM.
 
Old 11-11-05, 08:12 PM   #4
Poetics
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Get up out the closet, u aint conscious, u just a fake swoll-up playa named Mim-e-sis,
U ain’t even feelin this! Ur fruity ass needs a chaser 2 sip the slightest brew
I’m st8 up dissin u, I fucked ur bitch and raided ur sissy crew
And now all Ur bitches don't believe I spit da Izm, 'til my dick get all up in ‘em
U might as well cross the boarder and be Mexican, b4 I make u disappear and all Ur next of kin,
U ain’t NO G, fake thus ass wannabe, my dope rhymes give fake thugs a beat. …Down,
So don’t fuck around or ur punk ass will never be found, I’ll make u disappear like Jimmy Hoffa,
I got’cha, even in the heat of Phoenix, Arizona, run N hide, but I own ya, I warned ya!
Bout this ass whoppin…ye , I know ur sorry ass be hopin im only trippin (but I ain’t), don’t faint
U gave me the reason, I hear u screamin, prayin I wont say it, u won’t even be saved by Jesus
This very contagious rap amazes, speaks the truth of Ur current fazes,
u go both ways and it ain’t even a phase kid
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Old 11-12-05, 01:49 AM   #5
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I forgot about this. Let me key something up right quick.

What a waste of time.. man.. I'm leavin all your shit fucked
..But everybody on this damn site still knows that Tics suck
Don't act good.. you lose to herbs.. why dont you see dude
I'll beat your Technique just to laugh at how he's beatin you
And who the fuck is he?.... and your sig?.... i'm past patient
Some admire the rappers.. You just look at them half naked
You fucking homo.. ill punch your face then ill be drop kickin
Cause your such a disgrace even the dam clock'll stop Tickin
I'm being serious.. for real, I got voters saying "Oh, man.."
Cause you need so much aid..
..they'll let you start a community service program

Yeah.
 
Old 11-12-05, 08:18 AM   #6
C-Hood
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Voted For: Mimesis

ok obviously this battle was one sided....


poetics-your verse was just garb...had no punches...no personals...and some parts you didn't even rhyme...what the hell is goin on....



Mimesis-verse was straight....you can tell you didn't put that much effort into it...blah blah blah blah blah blah...nice verse


VOTE-Mimesis
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Old 11-12-05, 01:26 PM   #7
Poetics
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upppppiingggg......... READ ON!!!

seriously yall..vote on QUAL-i-TAY....RAP MY RAP....
now how can u vote on a dude who uses the following as rhyming words...
fucked...suck
dude...you
patient.... naked
kickin...tickin....ok fine this last one was decent....but shit...vote on QUALITY...not just being able to end ur line with a rhyming word.....FUCK.....my rap has a whole fuckin theme - i caught him with his pants down.////ST8 UPPP
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Old 11-12-05, 05:13 PM   #8
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Old 11-13-05, 03:05 PM   #9
Poetics
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uppppping # 2................................................. ................................................
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Old 11-13-05, 11:27 PM   #10
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Old 11-14-05, 01:53 PM   #11
Street Disciple
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Voted For: Mimesis

Mimesis won cus most of his bars rhymed mo than poetics, and he had betta punches imo.
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Old 11-14-05, 02:31 PM   #12
T-Dot
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Voted For: Mimesis

Poetics:
Get up out the closet, u aint conscious, u just a fake swoll-up playa named Mim-e-sis,
U ain’t even feelin this! Ur fruity ass needs a chaser 2 sip the slightest brew
Not Good - 2/10
I’m st8 up dissin u, I fucked ur bitch and raided ur sissy crew
And now all Ur bitches don't believe I spit da Izm, 'til my dick get all up in ‘em
Bad - 1/10
U might as well cross the boarder and be Mexican, b4 I make u disappear and all Ur next of kin,
U ain’t NO G, fake thus ass wannabe, my dope rhymes give fake thugs a beat. …Down,
....2/10
So don’t fuck around or ur punk ass will never be found, I’ll make u disappear like Jimmy Hoffa,
I got’cha, even in the heat of Phoenix, Arizona, run N hide, but I own ya, I warned ya!
BAD - 1/10
Bout this ass whoppin…ye , I know ur sorry ass be hopin im only trippin (but I ain’t), don’t faint
U gave me the reason, I hear u screamin, prayin I wont say it, u won’t even be saved by Jesus
OK - 3/10
This very contagious rap amazes, speaks the truth of Ur current fazes,
u go both ways and it ain’t even a phase kid
OK - 3/10
12/60

You had an ok flow, but your punches were not that strong.


Mimesis:
What a waste of time.. man.. I'm leavin all your shit fucked
..But everybody on this damn site still knows that Tics suck
MEH - 3/10
Don't act good.. you lose to herbs.. why dont you see dude
I'll beat your Technique just to laugh at how he's beatin you
LoL Good PUNCH - 5/10
And who the fuck is he?.... and your sig?.... i'm past patient
Some admire the rappers.. You just look at them half naked
HAHA, niice PUNCH - 6/10
You fucking homo.. ill punch your face then ill be drop kickin
Cause your such a disgrace even the dam clock'll stop Tickin
OK - 3/10
I'm being serious.. for real, I got voters saying "Oh, man.."
Cause you need so much aid..
..they'll let you start a community service program
Good Punch - 5/10
22/50

Good spit, you had a solid flow, and some strong swingin' punches.

Vote - MIM
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Old 11-14-05, 05:11 PM   #13
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Old 11-15-05, 05:05 PM   #14
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Old 11-15-05, 08:39 PM   #15
Blackmage
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Voted For: Mimesis

I was reading both verses and i made it through mim's and it was cool, i got to poetics and almost fell asleep. Pretty much this since i'm lazy

And who the fuck is he?.... and your sig?.... i'm past patient
Some admire the rappers.. You just look at them half naked
VS.
U gave me the reason, I hear u screamin, prayin I wont say it, u won’t even be saved by Jesus

that line was pretty garbo but that was the best I could do
Not your best work mim

by the way RTFB
v/mimesis
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