I think ima download this one too.....the hook is fuckin dope as fuck!, beat is fuckin dope as well. but for you intermental ima say your mic pressense was dope man came in nice, flow was on lock and as was your deleivery. lyrics were pretty good and the total image on this track is great, nice and smooth mellow style. dope track man

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thanks fam i apreciate that............

the beat isnt exactly the same but i think alot of u think the beat sounds familiar because it has the same notes of that Nelly and Kelly Rowland song.... cant remember the name, but yea, same piano...

this track is decent, the overall feel of the track is realgood, but its not a great song lyrically, and whoever is singin is pretty good...... pretty good song but u sound uninterested on the track sumtimes.... decent flow, but uve dropped better......decent

RTF..... links in my sig

aight..



first verse - flow was shaky in my opinion.. and couldnt understand alot of whaty your were saying.. had to listen hard to get it.. lyrics were aight.. not a bad verse..

chorus - He can sing.. harmonies were on point most of the time..

Second Verse - same as the first.. flow could have been more captivating.. but wasent bad..

third verse - same as before


i think you need work on ya lyrics a lil more.. flow will come.. not a bad track but it could use some work.. 6'ish/10

Thanks for youre feed..ill work on it

see everyone dissed both u and unf when you started including me lol but ur getting soooooo much better ur def in the top 10 audio heads on this site

i want to be on a song with ur singer :( his adlibs helped ur verses

1st verse your voice and accent sounded really good on this track the best ive heard it sound yrics i liked them they fit the dope ass beat well really lovely

singers hook was dooooooope hes good is he on sc?

2nd verse i didnt like quite as much alot of multis though cool shit

3rd verse i think i heard a pop the first time ever lol i liked ur flow and voice the best on this verse by far but i hate the hot dog line : /
overall cool ass track i think im going to download it
sorry i took so long to reply

lol its fine ma lmao at the hot dog line but yea his soundclick is:

www.soundclick.com/mardellmaxwell

and yea I apreciate that fo real and people dissed u cos u put me in CS?

see, I told you I was goin leave some feedback
Im lovin the piano
1st verse was cool
Im not really into love songs, girly tracks that much
the hook is fine
2nd verse
sounds ALOT better than the 1st verse
you was flowin waay better
hook again
3rd verse
im mos def feelin the rhyme scheme better
the hot dog and chedda line was, lol, un explainable, man
ok ok ok, overall, I would have to say this track is average.
Im not a big fan of love songs/ girly tracks, I only really feel a few.
But this shit isnt bad, because you was on the level of Bow Wow and Pretty Ricky and them other cats that be makin songs like this
its all good, keep elevatin, keep droppin tracks, as always

word thanks I apreciate the feed fam...