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12-22-05, 04:31 PM
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Intermental feat. Mardell Maxwell - Everythin' I Do
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WOW mardell maxwell on the adlibs, this guys soo talented and i thank him alot fo bein on my track...im on the verses...max on the hook..this is a real nice song fo ure gurl..this is dedicated to my girl fo christmas...
www.soundclick.com/intermental "everythin i do" http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217789 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217801
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12-22-05, 04:35 PM
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Listening:
Singing dope.I dunno if its me or r ur vocals a bit low.Sweet chorus.DOPE.Flow is nice! Liking ya lyrics!Emotion real subtle and fits,delivery is nice too! good track inter!  |
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12-22-05, 04:38 PM
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Aight
Beats Nice...I Heard This Beat I Forgot WHere It From Lol... Aight Inter Flows Nice Dleiverys Koo Lyrics Are Koo Presence Is Nice You Know I Aint Into Love Tracks That Much Hooks Fuckin Dope Damn He Can Sing WOW Inter Again Same as 1st Verse i Think Flow Falls Off Once Hook Again  Your Verse Again Same As Other Lol Hook Again.................. Nice Track Overall:8/10
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12-22-05, 04:38 PM
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Yea......thanks fo feed.........
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12-22-05, 04:43 PM
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get bakk on msn NOW! lol
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12-22-05, 05:46 PM
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upppin.............
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12-22-05, 06:13 PM
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Wow, Nice Man, Delivery Was Great, Flow Came Nice, Never Fell Off Once, Always On Point, Hook Was Nice To Man, Beat Was Great, What Beat Is This? This Track Was Hott Man Like It, Good To See Guys Doing SOmething For Girls Man, Mad Props On This Keep Doing Your Thing
PS We Should Collab
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12-22-05, 06:16 PM
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fo sho thats whatsup./.......
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12-22-05, 07:18 PM
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upppin dat........
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12-22-05, 08:26 PM
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wut if u don't have a girl?
eeh beat...I'm not feelin...sounds like the theme music to cheers or something...wait, I actually rapped to the theme from cheers nvm Inter...ur flow is fine...ur delivery is expressionless...and for this to be ur girl, u don't sound convinced hook sounds nice...cud be amped...I couldn't decipher what he was singing ur vocals need to come through crisper...amp them...and ur emotion is ZELCH disappointing the feel of this track is good, but that's only because the beat is so expressive...Take away the beat, and you have a lackluster track However, it's personal, so I won't hold that against you. Not a bad drop homie...jus need WAY MORE EMOTION in a track dedicated to the one u supposedly love. 1 |
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12-23-05, 03:43 PM
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it is^ lol BEAT SMIIITH! hes dope wit it. anways..ya presence is horrible. ya emotion is pretty bad. the singer is dope, who is it? the singers hot u need to keep elavatin. u got potential
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12-23-05, 08:55 AM
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i see what u sayin fam....but i think i wudve expressed too much emotion like ive done before n its fucked the flow up on the track..but imma try balance the two..thanks fo feed
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12-23-05, 11:31 AM
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uppppppppppppppppppp
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12-23-05, 03:07 PM
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Inter your flow is cool, delivery ok but could of had abit more emotion seeing as thought it's fo yo gurl. but think you shoudl up your vocal volume cause i cant really hear them imo. Hook's nice damn that guy is talented wit his singin it's real nice, but think the volume should be upped again couldn't really hear it but still nice. Verses are all good, flow wise, but think you should amp them can't really hear them. Same with the hook. But overall it was a pretty dope track for yo gurl. Hope she likes it dawg. Overall - 7.8/10 |
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12-23-05, 04:09 PM
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