man, your whole verse was dumb, what do you want me to explain...everything was fake personals....you had no wordplay, no creativity....like, both of you dropped whack, but D523 at least had some creative stuff, with wordplay, with actual punches....you just came out, and stated the gayest shit....like, how do you bar and code someone? WTF is that?!?!

look man, it's cool that you know a lot, but it ain't cool to degrade both of us for workin' to elevate. No cat is born instantly ill as fuck, it just don't happen. That's why you got like 7,000 posts and we got like a hundred or so.

Don't hate. It takes the fun outta shit, I just do this text shit for tha hell of it, to sharpen my mind. Sorry I ain't Jin or whatever.

D523, the votes are off, that last dude's vote didn't make sense really. we kin scrap that shit if ya want.

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I just want to check the polls.. because this was posted in LL and normally I wouldn't even do this, but I don't care..

im just sayin to get that dudes vote out of here, he said i had better punches and more creativity and then gives you the vote! with no explination. get that shit out of thereee

Bumppppppppppppp

what would you rather me do? baby you like all the other hurting noobs? ask fucking D523, when he first came, he was soooo shitty, but he elevated a hella ton, and i treated him the same way....buddy, its criticism, if you can't take it, shove off, you're actually handling it better than most, but its better for someone to come right out and say you're whack, they fancying it up saying shit like "oh, it was aigh, but whatever"

^ thats not advice, criticism, anything...i tell you whats up, and i'll try to give you a few pointers...i'm not the best, but i know some shit cause i have been here for a while....but yeah, text is for fun, i just have seeing people like paramik, who don't know diddly squat, nah saying?

true.. haha i remember i rode your ass askin for battles. when i was hittin you with punches that were like.. i swear to god, your a frod, i fucked your mom without her thong on like sischo with the thong song :)

ahhh the good days haha

BUT FORREAL VOTE ON THIS FUCKING BATTLE :)

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uppin this battle.. yeah, its D523 lol

bumppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppp

uppin this.............................................. ...............

uppinnnnn this..........

fucking. vote. or. else.

damn people........................just vote...........................

vote......................

Voted For: D523



Kid tries to spit so hard, but aint gettin nobodys attention
this mothafucka couldnt STICK OUT in the third dimension
^^
good punch cuz you flipped the stick out* wordplay new, with a clever metaphor
-My words are so sharp, resembling some sort of a meat cleaver
Like in football, faggit used to be a tight end, but now a wide receiver**
^^ good wordplay, decent punch, i was ganna use that wide receiver concept before.
vs.

Street? The only "crack" he sees is when he 'Fucks a plumber'...
Like 'his name' this 'shit-stain' ain't unique he's 'just a number'//
^^ this if u worded it better, and most of your stuff wasn't really worded right
....
anyway return the favor

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