rules:
10-14 lines
no being gay
no d/r
no crew votes
anddd yeah dont be gay
good luck

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 01-23-06 at 11:56 PM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

D523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-06 12:05 AM.

*Antic* has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-06 12:54 AM.

Kid tries to spit so hard, but aint gettin nobodys attention
this mothafucka couldnt STICK OUT in the third dimension
Knew I was gonna merk you nigga, it was guarenteed
Beatin your ass so bad, people confuse this for sodomy*
Saying he’ll give me a ‘taste’ of his style, thinkin he’s the shit? Right...
I listened to his advice, I now know what the taste of shit like!
It’s like the amazing race dawg, and it’s impossible to Pass me
I’ll leave you in the past, instead of antic, people be callin u antique
It’s like we was back in school, when I bulled him and took his lunch
But now he takes the batman approach, you know, “Wack” “Punch”
My words are so sharp, resembling some sort of a meat cleaver
Like in football, faggit used to be a tight end, but now a wide receiver**
Claim to be an audio head? Well, buddy, please believe
That when battling me?? You audio league***

*Sodomy is anal sex
** Tight end , wide receiver - gay sex
***- Audio(out of yo) league

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OptimisticallyGenius

Like comics and jokes his name is funny but his 'material's not'...
D523? I'll "bar" and code his name on tha side of a 'cereal box'//

Like unexplained votes ya can't "count" his numbers or 'letters'...
His style like rotten flesh fallin' off cuz my bars fuckin' this 'lepper'//

I'm 'certain it's fact' my style a slave driver fuckin' 'workin' this fag'...
His style's a book and I'm Hitler cuz of the way I'm 'burnin' this cat'//

I'll roll past the 'D' of '5' guys like I'm number "23" 'runnin' da floor'...
Like blind kidz he really can't see my "Bar" or even 'come in tha door'//

I'm a belligerent cook grillin' you the way I fucked up 'all your orders...
Like pictures I got this bitch straight pinned down in 'all four corners'//

Street? The only "crack" he sees is when he 'Fucks a plumber'...
Like 'his name' this 'shit-stain' ain't unique he's 'just a number'//

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Overall Net Text Record ~ 30-12 w/24 K.O.s

Overall Net Audio Record ~ 3-3 w/ 3 K.O.s

good job,
bumpin this battle up

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OptimisticallyGenius

BUMP, cmon vote on this shit

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OptimisticallyGenius

Voted For: *Antic*

Kid tries to spit so hard, but aint gettin nobodys attention
this mothafucka couldnt STICK OUT in the third dimension
Blah played as fuck
Knew I was gonna merk you nigga, it was guarenteed
Beatin your ass so bad, people confuse this for sodomy*
mehhhh
Saying he’ll give me a ‘taste’ of his style, thinkin he’s the shit? Right...
I listened to his advice, I now know what the taste of shit like!
played but iiight
It’s like the amazing race dawg, and it’s impossible to Pass me
I’ll leave you in the past, instead of antic, people be callin u antique
iiight
It’s like we was back in school, when I bulled him and took his lunch
But now he takes the batman approach, you know, “Wack” “Punch”
no ......bullshit
My words are so sharp, resembling some sort of a meat cleaver
Like in football, faggit used to be a tight end, but now a wide receiver**
.....................................
Claim to be an audio head? Well, buddy, please believe
That when battling me?? You audio league***
wack closer

basiclly you had bad punches some were played and most were juss dumb flow was iight

Like comics and jokes his name is funny but his 'material's not'...
D523? I'll "bar" and code his name on tha side of a 'cereal box'//
LMAO good punch/personal nice opener

Like unexplained votes ya can't "count" his numbers or 'letters'...
His style like rotten flesh fallin' off cuz my bars fuckin' this 'lepper'//
iiiight

I'm 'certain it's fact' my style a slave driver fuckin' 'workin' this fag'...
His style's a book and I'm Hitler cuz of the way I'm 'burnin' this cat'//
nahhhh

I'll roll past the 'D' of '5' guys like I'm number "23" 'runnin' da floor'...
Like blind kidz he really can't see my "Bar" or even 'come in tha door'//
iight but played concept
I'm a belligerent cook grillin' you the way I fucked up 'all your orders...
Like pictures I got this bitch straight pinned down in 'all four corners'//
nope not feeling it

Street? The only "crack" he sees is when he 'Fucks a plumber'...
Like 'his name' this 'shit-stain' ain't unique he's 'just a number'//
nice closer

overall antic had beter punches and he flowed better nice personals too

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

love to know how my first line is played.. but ok

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OptimisticallyGenius

uppin this shitttt

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OptimisticallyGenius

Like comics and jokes his name is funny but his 'material's not'...
D523? I'll "bar" and code his name on tha side of a 'cereal box'//
^comics and jokes usually don't have funny names, but funny material....plus, the punch has horrible wording
Like unexplained votes ya can't "count" his numbers or 'letters'...
His style like rotten flesh fallin' off cuz my bars fuckin' this 'lepper'//
^ how is his style like rotting flesh falling off? that doesn't make sense, and i doubt he's a lepper
I'm 'certain it's fact' my style a slave driver fuckin' 'workin' this fag'...
His style's a book and I'm Hitler cuz of the way I'm 'burnin' this cat'//
man, say some real shit...his style's not a book, you are not hitler...and the punch is played
I'll roll past the 'D' of '5' guys like I'm number "23" 'runnin' da floor'...
Like blind kidz he really can't see my "Bar" or even 'come in tha door'//
d of 5 guys? wtf? you're number 23? WTF?....not a bad punch, horrible wording and concept is played
I'm a belligerent cook grillin' you the way I fucked up 'all your orders...
Like pictures I got this bitch straight pinned down in 'all four corners'//
^best punch in the battle, shoulda said posters though, cause i dont pin up my pictures, i frame them
Street? The only "crack" he sees is when he 'Fucks a plumber'...
Like 'his name' this 'shit-stain' ain't unique he's 'just a number'//
^who cares about seeing crack, thats a fucking bad thing, and the punch fuggin sucked

Kid tries to spit so hard, but aint gettin nobodys attention
this mothafucka couldnt STICK OUT in the third dimension
^played concept, but not bad
Knew I was gonna merk you nigga, it was guarenteed
Beatin your ass so bad, people confuse this for sodomy*
^barely rhymes, but not bad, kinda gay though
Saying he’ll give me a ‘taste’ of his style, thinkin he’s the shit? Right...
I listened to his advice, I now know what the taste of shit like!
^played concept
It’s like the amazing race dawg, and it’s impossible to Pass me
I’ll leave you in the past, instead of antic, people be callin u antique
^creative, wording poorly though
It’s like we was back in school, when I bulled him and took his lunch
But now he takes the batman approach, you know, “Wack” “Punch”
^concept played, and you didn't take his lunch
My words are so sharp, resembling some sort of a meat cleaver
Like in football, faggit used to be a tight end, but now a wide receiver**
^oooh, seen this before as well *smh*, not bad
Claim to be an audio head? Well, buddy, please believe
That when battling me?? You audio league***
^a good punch if not bitten, this won the battle

yeah, both you need to step up, d523 won this because he had better overall punches, other dude, you need to get ideas of better concepts, word

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OMFG YOU ARE SO WHACK AND YOU DESERVE TO DIE, YOU ARE NOT ELITE, YOU ARE SUCH A FUCKING DICKRIDER, wowowowowooww, holy shit, antic did not win

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everyone's a critic...just a fuckin' textbattle...means nothin'...ayo if peepz gonna take time to do a break down of the verses, don't just say "this sucks" or "that's wack", explain some shit...that's just dumb.

uppin'.

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Overall Net Text Record ~ 30-12 w/24 K.O.s

Overall Net Audio Record ~ 3-3 w/ 3 K.O.s

Voted For: *Antic*

this was a nice battle man............dopeness this was good and close.


creativity: D523
wordplay: ANTIC
punches: D523
flow:ANTIC


overall verse: ANTIC


word.

nice battle guy's.

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