i forgot about this...........

ok peace...............always loved this beat.............

quality is kinda fuzzy........need better noise reduct........and ur flows kinda choppy...proly something to do with how u write.......and most ppl not gona see past that to hear the lyrics....witch dont seem bad actualy,...cant really understand the hook...that quality thing again....can tell ur telling a story, but u need to eccentuate [spelling] ur words more..up delevery a bit man , emotions not bad tho....flows not off but like i said, not real smooth...seems like u feel wut ur saying but need to b more comforable on the mic maybe

1ne

and leady....thats cool...but idk why u'd come in a thread to anounce that...

because i dont see why people need heads on the internet to tell them good/not good they are.

you should know it for yourself.

welp.......

thats the reason for the songs forum....to get yourself heard and catch a lil feedback....and i dont usualy do feed unless im makin a thread...so i figured i'd do this ....

www.soundclick.com/starofthecitymixtape


check it lemme know what u think