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Old 08-31-06, 12:10 AM   #1
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ok..all honesty...ask if me ur........
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better then....or any good..............


im handing real feedback here........rite now..........

i'm pretty drunk and might not do it later but....hey....it's ion for now

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Old 08-31-06, 12:21 AM   #2
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Old 08-31-06, 12:27 AM   #3
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ppfft..colby.b4 even listning to ur shit...i know ur iller then me and anyone else on this site...no lie.....u rock


ok..while listning..............


u sound way oldschool........u sould a bit unfomfortable on the mic.........quality is decent......the reverb is ehhh...i'd tone it down.....lyrics is oldschool..........not my style but iight.............voice ok nice.....flow is their..but like i said it's old school...................turn off the effects........flow is basic..idk, ur going for old school and thats cool but like.....only white kids going @ that now adays .....so u gona b solo...lol...........but it's deff not bad, u jus got ur own lil style i guess....


my advice to you......get on a new style....and drop ur effects....


PS....ur still the illest on this site.......
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Old 08-31-06, 12:40 AM   #4
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Old 08-31-06, 12:54 AM   #6
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Is my dick better then you?



not sure,,,,,


most likely not tho...from wut ur girl tells me...
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Old 08-31-06, 01:01 AM   #7
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listning to metaphoricaly speaking..........since im on all the other ones..........


ok..........you style is nice man.......i like it a lot.....kinda IT and kila priest wrapped up in one....ur voice is sick man.......and ur presence fits ur voice........all i can tell u is flow smoother....dont put so many words in ur bars............lyrics..mostly nice....once in a while u spit a lame punch......but topic wise...ur sick....work on punches...BTW tghe concept of this song is bananas..........love it man.........w a little work u will deff shine, ur nice bro....no doubt......jus get a bit grimier......or not...thats opinion....
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Old 08-31-06, 02:07 AM   #8
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Old 08-31-06, 02:16 AM   #10
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damn...u gotta get drunk to be honest?


no.....i gota b drunk to get on RV u cock smoker...........
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Old 08-31-06, 02:22 AM   #11
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blay...........


to be honest.....the south shits not my thing..........

but......hook sound way professional..........verse comes in real nice, blends well.........thing i dont see as in most southern rap...is musical content.....but thats kinda opinion....flows smooth....voice fits....in parts u sound a bit monotone....maybe up ur delevery a touch....hooks nice...i dont like paul wall...but if he's rich i dont see why ur not....honestly....but this is your basic dirty south track .....nice beat....shit talkin ...nice flow....not something im into but...hey thats southern rap....and u pull it off pretty well IMO....only thing i'd say is get a bit more comfortable on the mic........and if u wana reach a farther croud........get some metaS and shit that will reach pplz...

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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 08-31-06, 02:41 AM   #12
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ppfft..colby.b4 even listning to ur shit...i know ur iller then me and anyone else on this site...no lie.....u rock


ok..while listning..............


u sound way oldschool........u sould a bit unfomfortable on the mic.........quality is decent......the reverb is ehhh...i'd tone it down.....lyrics is oldschool..........not my style but iight.............voice ok nice.....flow is their..but like i said it's old school...................turn off the effects........flow is basic..idk, ur going for old school and thats cool but like.....only white kids going @ that now adays .....so u gona b solo...lol...........but it's deff not bad, u jus got ur own lil style i guess....


my advice to you......get on a new style....and drop ur effects....


PS....ur still the illest on this site.......


lol, werd, thanx spucca. yeah, im old skool, like 95% of wut i listen 2 iz old skool, lol, so u know. thanx fo tha feed werd
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Old 08-31-06, 02:53 AM   #13
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no doubt bro.......ur chilli chill in my book...and ur "werd" cracks me and my boy up every time we see it
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Old 08-31-06, 03:22 AM   #14
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