^^lol your hilarious

wanksta shit?

this is a song about my life.......you gotta get off my nuts

I just had a show tonight.....i'm working with people who make money trust me

You have no reason too come in here even hating on me...........cuz chances are your problay wack as fuck lol

I grew up with out parents.......I grew up in a 40,000 dollar house....just like i said this is my life.....this is my pain this is my love this is my gain...you can say that you know me you can say your my homie....simple n plain untill you know me.....i say fuck you you dont know SHIT about me....so get off my nuts quick........or step up and battle

oh yeah by the way the internet is problay one of the best places these days too get signed especillly through myspace....but like i said again i'm 16 not worried about shit right now i'm moving too either new york or california when i turn 18.....then ill be worried about rapping serious for now i'm just building my skills

thats all i'm saying

the hook is aight nice mix n shit flow seemed to be the same thru out voice is cool subject is cool hook is still ehh too me but yeah it grows on me .lol overall verses was str8 sounds kinda like ll cool jays last album lol gud drop

Listenin'...

I think you got a lil too much reverb on this..thats my only complaint..

Delivery: This is working alot for you, in this track you spoke up with confidence and delivered the emotion perfectly...

Emotion: Flowing off the delivery comment, emotion is perfect here..you can tell you meant it and I feel what you mean about your pops, this is real you can tell that you rlly feelign this...

Flow: Havent heard it fall off in this track...it stayed on beat

Hook: When I first heard it to be honest i was like ehh...kinda ruined the song but it got better and grew on me...alot..

Lyrics: Personal...Good

Overall:

Fam, audio-wise you kept this song real nice, also you had that emotion and deepness and I respect that...this is definitely a dope song..

***Downloads***

Yo fam when we gonna collab man?..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234990

can you rtf please

haha nah paste tense im talkin bout one of the otha tracks i peeped u rappin obut how u ridin wit this in that and how u got all this when u don't ur shit ain't official stop acting like it is www.myspace.com/theprovidenceproject IM OFFICIAL u lightweight

Ayo Dope shit man fiya, yah hooks was decent u dropped on-time i like it
Real deep man catchy tune if u kno what im sayin felt it..
Overall: 8/10

I got pretty into the song was feelin it good vibe, deep shit personally great...

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235001

You got G UNIT in your sig

I really doubt your "official"

by the way

having a myspace doesnt make you too official either

i haven't heard one track from you

woooooooooorrrrrrrrrddddd.

^^ i will soon as i get home......this computer i'm on is too slow too hear anything on

real official..

Your dumbass kid ima fuckin promoter im not a rapper


100

its not private no more they had it like that when the web designer was editing it

anyone could have a myspace lol your fuckin lame

hahah next he's gonna post a soundclick....get the fuck out

ok ill check this out.........


vocals were alright could hear u good
lyrics were great man no problem there they were great
beat ,well i had used that beat not that bad of a beat
flow was great whent to the beat it when great with the flow of the song

hook was all right i didnt like the first line but the rest of it nice

end offs were koo

overall it was worth the playback
i'd give it a 8.3/10
great trax

u can rtf later when i drop otha trax maybe tonight...werd