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Old 09-15-06, 11:15 PM   #1
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Respect. Quick track to clear some things up. WILL RTF

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Old 09-16-06, 10:12 AM   #2
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Listenin'...

You record in this the studio?..doesnt sound it lol..

You have a decent voice for a uk cat...im feeling the flow its pretty decent...your emotion is good like u ready for war...delivery is decent...jus tha qual is fucked up..its true u got work to do but u ain t recorded alot so u keep going b..aight shit fam...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234990

can u rtf
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Old 09-16-06, 08:52 PM   #3
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yeh il hit it man,

na this wasnt the one in the studio mate...thats this weds.

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Old 09-16-06, 08:54 PM   #4
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Voice Is Crazy....

I Like the beat..flow is kinda off, but it's alright, not really that bad just a word everyone once in a while seems like it's rushed to get in there...

The emotion is Nice though, you keep good emotion during the verse ...just work on enunciating words more and not pushing them together..i do that sometimes to...
Work on flow a little, develop a little more into your own..but otherwise..it was an okay track..

hit up - This is For -

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235025
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Old 09-16-06, 09:51 PM   #5
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energy like a mother fucker on this bro, hard to make out your lyrics, but fro what i can hear you on some cool raw shit.
quality is fucked up, and flow doesnt drop off at times, there are a couple a stretched bars in this aswell. but overall the energy is dope bro.
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