alright, 4-2 so far.. this one will be close shit...
good luck man, both were very nice drops...

nothing but respect for my boy 13...

13 and Sureal were Both Friggin Ill
That was a crazy ass alter ego battle
But i gotta go with 13 On this one
my vote go's to 13

Mad Man: Your vote will not count until it is explained better. 4-2 Sureal

i disagree....................i think sureals too k this.................he had more heart...........and defiantly a more touching story........................also pretty original...............funny how most topial battlesend in suicide................
VOTE:sureal

alright, 5-2 so far... uhm .. yea i think the suicide add alot more emotion at the end of the verse, like my last two lines hooked alot of people....

-Sureal

good battle....but i think its gay how mad is taking my votes....either way.....its the internet.....good luck dawg..........1

Aight. I read this shit over and over. I liked both of the verses. I was feeling 13th a little bit more. I think it went to the topic better. No doubt there. That was a great topic for both Emcees. Personally I think 13th took this shit easily. He rode on the topic with out getting off of it. His whole thing had my attention.

Vote= 13th Disciple


----I liked surreals whole view. the end was tight and it was deep. ^^^13th took this with jus momentem. i felt it, i imagined it, i lived it. vote=13

wow...if you ever wanted to read a good topical
battle this was it.....shit you guys, that fuckin masterful..

13th - I liked ure shit. . very complex to a simple mans eye
however. I figured halfway through your story what the ending
was..a nice twist none the less

Sureal - Damn im glad i dont have to go against you again...
your shit didn't have the complexities that 13ths had, but still
very easy to understand and read..the lines were a littile simple
but the story was just addiciting...by your second to last
paragraph i knew the ending tho..shit this is fuckin tough

tha break down. . .

13th Disciple;

Flow: 7
Vocab: 9.5
On topic: 9
Wordplay: 6
Shock effect: 7.5
Opener: 6
Ending: 8

Total : 53 pts

Sureal ;

Flow: 8
Vocab: 7
On Topic: 9.5
Wordplay: 7
Shock Effect: 9
Opener: 7
Ending: 9

Total : 56.5 pts

Vote - Sureal

(props to both ! )

BOTH WAS GOOD BUT 13TH STAYED ON TRACK, HIS LINES WERE LONG & IT SEEMED BETTER SINCE IT WAS READ IN TEXT, SUREAL ENDIN WAS GOOD BUT HIS OVERALL TOPIC WASNT AS ON POINT AS 13TH'S
VOTE=13TH

6-4...actually 6-5...but whos counting..lol........appreciate the voting yall.....keep em coming............................................ ......1

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both came hard on this shit...i was feeln how sureal broke it down into like chapters and shiit, that was nice, but 2 me 13th..had a much better flow & the alter ego was more G u kno? lol...but naah seriously...13 & sureal both battled good..but when i read this by 13th..he won it..
"one half luvs the kiddin and playin but concentration and
medication kept the beast for a moment encaged/percieving an
incredible act of violence from words changin into a monster when
this hulk is enraged"

shiitz heated!!

VOTE=13th DISCIPLE

1Luv
Cin Ladin

Hey 13, wouldn't you be pissed if someone said
"Close battle, but ima give it to Sureal"
with nothing else said. Those votes need to be
explained.
Sureal - 6
13 - 5

I Feel Ya Mad....I Ain't Bitchin...lol...........This Is A Good Battle.......
Keep Them Votes Commin............................................ .................1

ok , yup 6 -5 so far, but i did not understand
g-unit brooklyns reason...

HIS LINES WERE LONG & IT SEEMED BETTER SINCE IT WAS READ IN TEXT

it would obviously be READ in TEXT ... and he wins cuz his lines
are longer?

w/e you can keep that vote, but that juss' seems fucked...

-Sureal

how bout we just take all of my votes?.....6 surreal 0 disciple......i don't think so tim....lol.............up......................... .........................1

!3th Was really Good a great story
the concept was great

But....Sureals was a lil bit better
Was undecided till Sureal's ending
was tight good structure an i liked
the way you preceived it...

Vote - sureal