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Dyslexic 07-30-03 01:53 AM

It's simple. Constant had more punches and complexity.

Restricted get more intrcicate and always try to improve your rhyme scheme even if you develop your own style or something keep exploring new things otherwise you won't improve.

Check these battles y'all

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=68717

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=68612

Slacker 07-30-03 01:56 AM

Constant got this shit bymy count, he ahd the punches and the technicality, the other dude had flow but that's it.

Vote-Constant.

Please vote on this, no one else does:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69549

DE$SKILL$CUMN@T 07-30-03 02:26 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by |[-neBo-]|
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69558

^^^ please vote here for me voting on your battle! share the wealth!!!!! hehehe

Constant-

- an okay intro... punch harder
- good flows and good multies... but lacked metaphors and punches
- dont say nigga so much... geez
- lol you said "your ass is grass"
- not that great closer...but not a bad verse.

Restricted-

- you are getting docked points for reading his entire verse and making quotes from it before you spit. you shouldnt read his shit anyways... just spit and then talk your shit if you have to. you are also getting docked points for poor sportsmanship.
- good punch in the first line
- follow up is not good... i am already losing interest.
- the fact that you have such poor sportsmanship makes me not even wanna read your verse.........
- lines are not good... you are writing WAY too much... and nothing is really stikking out...
- nothing really flows that well... and this is EXTREMELY hard to read...

u say ur all natural like horrible fruit-drinks//u stay quite learin from ur mute-shrinks//

^^^ that is really bad man... you need to elevate!!!

- weak ending

Vote: Constant
true dat now peep my BATTLE

HoT oNe 07-30-03 03:13 AM

Constant got my vote... his shit had more punchlines, well his just hit a little harder.. both had a nice verse but i was feeling his shit just a little more...

Flow-Restricted
Mults-Con
Pucnh-Con
Vocab-Res- Had some word i never herd of...

Vote=Constant

CoNstaNT 07-30-03 03:35 AM

dun't forget to poll vote yoo...al u cats that didn't...poll needa come back and poll....i voted honest and polled on ya'll battles....thanx...oneeeeeeee

MiCsYcKlE 07-30-03 03:38 AM

Restricted plain ol stunk here
Vote COnsant

Hey could you hit the polls in these for sum no shows
seein how i wasted my verses on them FAGS

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69410


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69415

phiXion 07-30-03 03:39 AM

constant had better punches and a more consistant flow, nice verse +1 constant

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