u wanted a battle here it is...

..u'r rules from BS

dun't feed either nigga.....aight now


this nigga thinks i'm followin him, if anythin u'r followin me-cuz u'r on my nuts-and still swallowin gee...
u'r whole lifes restricted, from goin any further-if u got beef-well i'm eatin plenty of burgers...
i'm leavin R heavily-murdered, without a dagger-cuz u'r only substance is nuthin-but a laughin matter...
too fast to add-up, i got the math and skillz-the closest i'm comin death-is autographin u'r will...
u'r bad at this drill, so take some fuckin notes-rub on a pole-i'll cut u'r nuts off-just to take away half the votes...
anotha faggot that chokes, u betta kick this nigga out-oh i forgot he gets slept on? can i fit my foot in a slouch...
How are u winnin battles, u aint no star-put a zero one in u'r prefix-and still wuldn't have hollywood bars...(he's from 920 put 01 that's 90210)...
U'r far from good, more like an elemental disaster-who gets ripped up-like tornoado's through thin plaster...
bitch u'r ass is grass, no i won't pass the flask-won't let u drink away the pain-it'll commense on u fast...
u'r a piece of trash, i'll simply throw away-minus the intelligence-till u grow a brain....

onee spit nigga

nice spit i'l vote when the other nigga spit

hit dis up wit a vote
i'm winnin 3-0
the dude bit against me

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69256

i can't vote i'm in that crew now....sorry mann i noticed that too....it looks like he bit...which isn't good..but i dun't kno who he bit yet?? do u?? otherwise can't accuse em of anythin.....1111111111

not bad not bad// but u have some faults in there as well like structure and flow// some not all of ur rhymez werent that great like dagger and matter// wtf//

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"U'r far from good, more like an elemental disaster-who gets ripped up-like tornoado's through thin plaster...
bitch u'r ass is grass, no i won't pass the flask-won't let u drink away the pain-it'll commense on u fast...
u'r a piece of trash, i'll simply throw away-minus the intelligence-till u grow a brain....

That was horrible usin pussy rhymes as such but other then that nice spit (no hate) ill spit in like 3 minutes

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this kat constant needs 2 reset/cuz his losses have hit as far as they can get//
i run over u like a animal stamp-ede// only way u can run with me is if u carryin amp-speed//

he be d/r ne body i be battlin tryin 2 show them worthy//give u an L like a grundy 2 a nerdie//
shiftin gears hitin top speed runnin u over till undetectable/cant be beatin as tho trull flexible//

how can he breath with all those losses suffo-cating//lossin respect as though lypo-deflating//
ur wins r groin faint like ur avatar its showin its pixels/runnin faster then u can pop pimples/

my wins keep goin up as thow runin on a straight-slant/attactin guys with his mate-chant//
clinicaly proven ur all dumb-2-boot//couldnt take ur bullshit so moved my thumb-2-mute//

actin on nothin but instincs 2 traumatize/hes set on constant L but still dont realize//
boy puts in a bad rep 4 rappers all through-out//shoot him 4 sayin shit that i new-about//

bitin lines like cookies bein eatin by gorgy porgy//he say he true but caught in a all male orgy/
i got him runin scared but cant find the door-out/shit stains wont get out so use more-shout//

u run into a bombshell but theres a bomb awaiting/staple ur mouth cuz u keep on nagging//
gettin cocks in ur ass as though a gay fugitive//cuz joinin 2 gether is the only way u can become an excutive//(thats sick joinin by cock// no hate 2 executives but they had 2 join to get stronger)

ill be shoutin orders 2 u as tho ur a low marine//cryin wen old yeller died on the movie screen
drowndin out ur spits cuz ur cryin me a river/ur spits r plain like the village in The Giver//
(its a book bout like a black&white world)

u say ur all natural like horrible fruit-drinks//u stay quite learin from ur mute-shrinks//
tryin 2 hack into my spits databases section refined/ but caught u in the act and access denied//

ender//

u got less wins then jay z features//(features in others song)scared of the pussy cuz u think hidin inside r pussy creatures// beat u with my fists till ur bloody and batter//
like in the Rocky movies slow down my punch 2 wath ur blood splatter//

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why are u quotin my shit do that after u post kiddd....and give u'r criticism...not bad spit though...let's get sum votes...111111

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69558

^^^ please vote here for me voting on your battle! share the wealth!!!!! hehehe

Constant-

- an okay intro... punch harder
- good flows and good multies... but lacked metaphors and punches
- dont say nigga so much... geez
- lol you said "your ass is grass"
- not that great closer...but not a bad verse.

Restricted-

- you are getting docked points for reading his entire verse and making quotes from it before you spit. you shouldnt read his shit anyways... just spit and then talk your shit if you have to. you are also getting docked points for poor sportsmanship.
- good punch in the first line
- follow up is not good... i am already losing interest.
- the fact that you have such poor sportsmanship makes me not even wanna read your verse.........
- lines are not good... you are writing WAY too much... and nothing is really stikking out...
- nothing really flows that well... and this is EXTREMELY hard to read...

u say ur all natural like horrible fruit-drinks//u stay quite learin from ur mute-shrinks//

^^^ that is really bad man... you need to elevate!!!

- weak ending

Vote: Constant

k thanx 4 voting but who the fuck r u// my basketball coach// " ur sittin down mister for poor sportsmanship// who gives a shit// and my shit is hard 2 read huh is that y like tons of other ppl write there shit like that but w/e i cant change that shit know//

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aight yo good breakdown nebo...it is bad he read my whole verse..but bad sportsmanship...i dun't think thier is sportsmanship in battle's otherwise good breakdown...1-0 me upppinnn.....

my votes goes to constant, betta punches and i liked the flow
all though restricted had a nice flow too, but constant took it with the punches

please up this...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69405