feedback
 

firstoff.. I feel weird postin replies on someone's thing that the artist didnt submit.. anyways.. your girl seems shy and she seems alone.. needin someone.. whats your girls phone # mabye il call her up and tell her this feedback one on one.. but since im usin this as one of my replies... here it goes even tho if she doesnt wanna be a rapper and is just doing this to please your fantasy of havin a female emcee as a gf... ok..
pros:
flow was ok
last part was good
basic, but cool

cons:
first part.. but u copped to your weakness early off so it setup the song i guess..
a lil short

yo return the fav and drop some feedback on one of my open mics :) (in my sig)