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fukkaz (better) -handcuffs
*Shit-Happens* -resticted
Jay-R - The Mic Life

Aight a little thing that my girl wrote me and i want feedback so holla

you made me write this rap, so i guess here goes,
but i'm not gonna promise that i'll have any flow.
i miss you so much, from my head to my toes
and how much a want you here, can't nobody know.
i feel like a loser just to write this rap,
just so you know, you got yourself in this trap.
and you and i know it's just a peice of crap,
but you love me too much to tell me that.
it's crazy- how eighty-seven miles can make
such a stupid situation that's so hard to take.
sometimes i feel like i'm about to break
but we're keepin it together for each other's sake.
so i'm counting the days until i see you again,
14 days of busy, plus one for your friends.
having you inside me is the only way to mend
my broken heart, i miss you, and i fully intend
to be your baby's mama for as long as you'll be
my lover and my best friend-and some day i see
us in love and so much older, we will finally be free.
and i'm hopin that forever it will be you and me.

drop you honest opinion thanks