that was ah coo battle both need elevation work on ya stretched bars in kinda shorten tha percentages


my prospective

punches-jesus
flow-none
struc'-none
enjoyment-jus jesus
metas-jesus
creativity-mario
vote-jesus

jus thought his was betta

good work kids elevate more

aiight so lets get more votes """""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""

uppin for votes form ppl who can poll.................................
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peace

flow: Neither
Punchs: Jesus
Metas: Jesus
Structure: Neither
Enjoy: Jesus

Vote: Jesus

quit it with the streatched lines...keep elevatin

thanx dawg..... upping for more votes........... 2-0 for me..........................................

peace

come on ppl dont let this sleep ............................
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peace

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Mario Can You Hit This Up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93937

ok uppin for votes
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whoa yall lines is way too stretched but i break it down like this

punches-jesus
flow-mario
opener-jesus
closer-jesus
creativity-mario
personals-jesus

thx, uppin fo votes 3-0................................................. ......
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peace

iight come on need more votes

i gotta win this one

sssshhhiiitttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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punches-jesus
flow-none
struc'-none
metas-jesus
creativity-mario
vote-jesus

hit this batttle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94146

aight thanx upping for 1 more vote for the win...........................
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peace

enjoyment - jesus
wordplay - jesus
punchlines - jesus
structure - jesus
creativity - jesus
complexity - jesus
opener - jesus
closer - jesus
vocab - jesus
overall - jesus