Man, shut the fuck up!

it's hot... i love the cocky attitude it reminds me of me

Thanks dogg...

YO SON THIS SHIT WAS HOT, FLOW,VOCAB,MULTIS WERE ALL THER. I LIKED THE SCHME TO.
YOU CAME HARD ON THIS NIGGA. GIVE A 8.5/10.

YO CHECK OUT MY OPEN MIC AND DROP SOME FEEDBACK,THX.
PEACE.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2493#post952493

Fuck....good piece...v.good piece....bladow!!!!....Wordplay n flow etc on point like a webcast elvis impersonator..ILL

Thanks dogg. Anyone else gon' hit this up?

???

Yeah....

I like to see people actualy put more than 1 verse and a chorus up on RB, I mean id never do it....But anyway....

It was a good piece yeah..There was some parts were i lost flow due to change in syllable count...But that didnt change the wacknes dopeness thing at all......

Whats allso good is that allot of it was a ME ME ME song....But it didnt sound corny...It sounded like it pulled off really good....

I liked it because it showed that peeps can sometimes say that their the sickest MC without soundin bigg headed and corny...

Nice...

Peep my shit man...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103384

nice rhyme scheme
flowed nicely
good vocab
8.5/10
keep droppin dis was a nice piece

9/10

flow was thier an so was the vocab an creativity point...
nicley hit.......

could be flowd well on a beat....

Omg
Cot Dayum
This Was A Really Dope Piece Maybe The Best I've Seen From A RB Emcee Thus Far.You've Got Talent,You Should Most Def Record This On Audio.This Must Of Taken You Awhile To Create,Cause The Structure Was Near Perfect.Just Up The Vocabulary A Little Bit
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Thanks.

It took about 3 hours to write and to get it to flow right and shit.