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"Respect Me"

[Verse 1]
A 16 year old more potent than acapulco gold
I'll make your vocals fold, shut up and behold
I dismiss mc's and throw 'em in a deep abyss
I'll bullet kiss anyone who wanna step to this
The only mastermind to compose such rhymes
It feels i'm better than the rest by 1,000 times
Step back, you're in my zone of constant impact
I'm coming at my allies with a diversionary attack
Welcome to the future, how does it suit ya?
Bitch tell me what I wanna hear before I shoot ya
Ya unstable, days numbered like the periodic table
Mp~Phasiz got da power to set your life on disable
I'm off my rocker and it shouldn't be a shocker
I have more skill than Michael Jordan's had lockers
Starts when my pen copies the thoughts of my heart
I produce incredible art, that's what sets us apart

[Chorus x2]
Y'all better show appreciation for what i've done
Recognize i've saved our nation and then some
I'm the creation of rap and was birthed from a gun
Y'all better respect me, each and every one

[Verse 2]
There was once a guy who thought he was tough
And interestingly enough he's dead and i'm in cuffs
What do I gotta do to prove my words are true?
Do I really have to walk up and put a gun to you?
It was found empirical that i'm a child born miracle
Expose your flaws for the rest of us to redicule
And skin is only upholstery to clothe human souls
Burn you readily and watch like bituminous coal
I specialize in statistics, a mathematical statistician
Ya mind outta commission, body in an unfavorable position
Give credit where it's due i'm a better rapper than you
In relation to my career give it an analytical review
Who's responsable for the widely hip-hop rapport?
Skill don't matter no more it's 'bout money galore
If there is a heaven somewhere above space
Than i will give grace while others go to a lower place

[Chorus x2]
Y'all better show appreciation for what i've done
Recognize i've saved our nation and then some
I'm the creation of rap and was birthed from a gun
Y'all better respect me, each and every one

[Verse 3]
Just the thought of falling off makes me distraught
I'm chasing my dream and it's bound to get caught
It's like i'm writin in brail, I don't see things I feel them
My messenge is distorted, unclear like an opaque gem
Expect the unexpected when ya dealin with Mp~Phasiz
Cause if ya fail to realize only a few true rappers exist
Many seem to think skill flows through the mainstream
But that's an extreme, the industrie's supreme scheme
I'm equally the same as Brother Ali, quality is my policy
I'm exceptionally colorful and skillfully scented like potpourri
Tell the media to stop followin me, there's nothin here to see
Except for corpses and debris of mc's who challenged me
I aint ever gonna fade out cause hip-hop is what i'm about
Without a shadow of doubt i'm the illest seed ever to sprout
It's like I run by clockwork because I don't miss a tick
I'd rather die right today than live a life without music

[Chorus x2]
Y'all better show appreciation for what i've done
Recognize i've saved our nation and then some
I'm the creation of rap and was birthed from a gun
Y'all better respect me, each and every one

you got alot of skillz in rhyme structure wordplay and delivery but i feel something still lacked im not sure what but it is missing something

damn...this was actually a really hot piece, it flowed good through out, had some good vocab i liked the wordplay and meaning to this your openings and clsings to verses were pretty good All in all great dop...yo could you hit my battle up thats in my sig its bein slept on...thanks apreciate it if ye do pz

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i liked this i feel ur emotion
i'd give it 8.5/10 nice shit keep spittin

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Yeah i agree with them...this was a real nice piece, it was worth the read i thought, well done....The structure in this was real nice i thought, structure it well...The flow in the piece was real nice through out it, it stayed on point through out the piece....You vocab was good, nothing was wrong with it.....The chorus was pretty good as well...overall this was a good piece...keep at it.

Over all that was really nice. I liked the chorus it flowed pretty well. Alothough in some parts you used some words that got it out of flow a little like this---"I'm coming at my allies with a diversionary attack
Welcome to the future...hows does it suit ya?"

You could use this-----I'm coming at my allies with a diversion attack
Welcome YOU BACK to the future...SO hows does it suit ya?

Somethin like that hope i helped

nice piece MP~Phasiz.................good flow of text, excellent rhyme structure..........most of the cats who already viewed it, hit tha nail..........8.5/10 keep spitting bars

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yea this was hott.....it wasnt messy at all either
you had a good vocab so we know that u aint rhyming the easy words like cat in the hat
anyways it was a hott piece

great peice i liked your emotions, creativity and imagry. i was really feelin this peice good work dawg..9/10

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really good structure n nice chorus . if ur gonna record that u should add some talkin to introduce n outro i.m.o

Nice work, i liked the rhyme scheme, You'll make it places dog keep ur head up, you got great skill. I don't really have constructive critism for this piece it doesn't need it, I just like the 1st and 2nd verses better than the 3rd. The 3rd doesn't flow as well.

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16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish

shit nigga u writtin ya songz guess u aint seen mine
so picture ma ryme

VERSE ONE::OPE
now b shook cuz i was mentally gon
since tha day i was born
i was all in pain afta birth
niggaz neva gave a fuck even tho it hurt
now they askin why i act they way a nigga doez
now u know the ansa to this question dont b buzzed
cuz i was angry wit ma self
tho the shit cudnt b yo-aint no help
had no one wit may
the onez i thot was now i no how tha shit bay
im goin kinda crazay
yawl pray to the lord infinite to save may
cuz Godz ma only help now thankin the way he made may
cuz slowly the worlz growin against me
niggaz iz fearin the fuck they dont wanna face me
was told the truth
n lied to
lied by bitchez n niggaz wish I knew!
why the fuck they planned it out in ma mind shits still livin
the nigga knowz hez fo eva forgiven
so y the fuck am i called this
lost in thots nigga thanx fo tellin me where the hall iz
n i know niggaz gon b mad cuz this the truest shit i eva wrote
n i know nigga this the truest shit u'll eva quote!!!

(CHORUS)
now holla if ya wit may!!!
holla if u still wit may!!??
holla if u still wit may?
ansa may u still wit me
tell may niggaz u still wit may?!?!

VERSE TWO::OPE
now nigga look had no plan fo the second verse
but cudnt help it the thots keep gettin worse
now ima tell ya the rest shit
i hope u ova came ma blessed shit
cuz by that shit i feel lordz wit may
n sumone iz so rite now plz dont get may
cuz ive bin thru a lot
the fuck nigga u musta fo-GOT!
i dont give a fuck cuz i ova came it aint no excuse
but this games ma only use
so tell me am i wrong cuz im only bein honest
its ma job to b one cuz iman artist
so tell me i aint that too
n plzz niggaz dont start shit like i dont no no rap thru
cuz thats what ive bin hearin kinda blindly
neva known now i know how it happend so kindly
now tryte put me to a low
keepz on judgein may n ma dogz yo
i aint takin no shit but people gettin to ma nervez now
its like im offin a car n curbz out
but aint no case a givin up
gots to fite on nigga that i am juss tellin ya!
cuz niggaz agains may getcha cut throat
nigga b aware i aint scared say whatup DOPE

(CHORUS)
now holla if ya still wit may!!!
holla if u still wit may!!??
holla if u still wit may?
ansa may u still wit me
tell may niggaz u still wit may?!?!

VERSE THREE::OPE
nigga havin wicked vizion in ma dreamz
niggaz u cant picture it even if u wanna tho it seemz
am i gon nuts all of a sudden ma raps changed
like shit upside down in ma brain arranged
so label me fo sumshit i aint done yet
cant wait till that mental state comezyet
aint no stoppin to the stress dropin like rain
the fuck u smokin think im jokin picture ma pain
but u cant juss do it
u dont know how its bin thru it
mean muggin cold hearted fuckin birdz
do talk lotta bad talk u aint heard
but this waznt ma case see
cuz i told ya mine bout shit n even where the place be
move the fuck up out gimme space i need it
stick this weed up urz cuz hater i dont do no weed shit
cuz ive bin thru curse n im cussin
loss of heart mean ryme bussin
dont take it personal plz dont mind
cuz aint ma fault shit keeps runnin thru mine every time
dont tripp cuz i know i got lota niggaz pissed off
bitchez iz fo eva lierz now i belive it n shits off!

(CHORUS)
now holla if ya still wit may!!!
nigga holla if u still wit may!!??
holla if u still wit may?
ansa may u still wit me
tell may niggaz u still wit may?!?!

DOPE TALKIN:::OUTRO
is u yawl still wit dope? u still wit may? fuck it all tite shit i know u wit may (with may)
turn the fuck off!

nigga its me DOPE AKA DEE 1 SICKS AKA TUDOPE T
IM 15 nigga so picture this
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