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Terumoto 07-26-04 05:07 PM

ima return it when i get the chance, dont worry...

uppin

Barz&Penstripes 07-28-04 11:50 PM

What up emcees! Calamity, I have to give this round to One Man Band home boy! Reasons being a)he came with stronger metaphorically b)punchlines were creatively put together and c) you hung yourself with your opening line it was just too weak on the lyrical side "no merits, scared hairless, tho he's not a bald eagle" You should took more time to construct your rhyme ---- no diss, that's just what it is.

Peace
Barz&Penstripes

Ca'lam 07-28-04 11:58 PM

^lol.. i dont feel like swaying right now.. to tired.. my first line was a metaphore jsut so you know.. no merits ,scared hairless, tho he not a bald eagle... that makes pretty good sense hehe... but i mean, you got ya opinion and ima respect that... uppin for more votes... 3-0 me..

Ill-Grammatix 07-29-04 12:09 AM

I have no idea what most of these people are thinking! OMB clearly annihilated Calamity. If you understand the scheme and flow of OMB's rhyme you'll see that it's damn near flawless! He was way more original with lines like:

by even challengin me again, i can see you got no more than failin-grade..
fuck a icepick, ill impale-a-blade, calams no em, but hes still trailer-made..

that's good shyt! the multi's were everywhere.he could have been more personal though. other than that OMB had this in the bag!

Calamity,

stop and watch,maybe you can shake them newb habits..
you should be a trackstar,usin all them damn dashes..

this was easily ya best line ....
pretty damn good one if i do say so myself... but the rest of it was blahhh!

Let's look at a few of them...

you couldnt soar above par,if dropped from a plane..

whys this dude rappin, his "instruments" are pom-poms..

ya rhymes trail away in memory,like washed out jeans..
hes addicted to herbs, just like crack house fiends..

these were terrible. You were a lot more personal ... especially with that vote that you gave him to win... that's kinda sick! confusing as all hell but sick. Anyway, your wack lines outweighed ya good ones that you had so I'd say that OMB got this>

Terumoto 07-29-04 04:04 AM

woooooord... uppin.....

haha... lmao at latin's beef with i daughter hoz


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