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One-Man-Band 0 0%
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Old 07-13-04, 07:38 PM   #1
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Calamity Vs One-Man-Band (part 2)

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Drop when you can.. But Dont take a life time
Checkin in.. rematch
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Old 07-13-04, 09:23 PM   #2
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checkin in.... ill be droppin later, n no feedin so it doesnt matter whos first
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Old 07-14-04, 02:30 AM   #3
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my victims bruise-n-bleed, this dude steppin again is new-to-me..*
surprising, cos usually my battle raps end up as eulogies..
mcs aint what they used-to-be.. wack kids, my dispels-are-insane..
no votes for calamity, cos bitin chinos the only way he XL's-in-this-game..

Plating my knuckles-with-brass, Ill slam clam's face-into-glass..
burn the herb, leave a match by your corpse after I drench-it-in-gas..
attack-with-an-axe, beat ya till theres no bones-left-to-crack..
Twist up ya neck till you can count-tha amounta holes-in-ya-back..

propellin-the-pain.. ya cant last, ya half assed imagery is faulty-n-merciful..
punches missin-me while my verse crunches with riveting multis-n-personals..
snubbin-n-hurtin-you..id end it, bitch, but i wanna see ya suffer-in-pain..
cos frankly this kid couldnt hold down if i handed him cuffs-n-a-chain..

tough-in-the-brain, server minds wit clever rhymes, while loosin-my-mental..
im fuckin crazy, now y'all understand how easily i beat dudes-with-a-pencil..
rip bitches fit for clips from the six clipped to my hips, flip'd hits u threw-me..
this kids dick's licked by his click, crew voters, but im a misfit-for-newbies..

by even challengin me again, i can see you got no more than failin-grade..
fuck a icepick, ill impale-a-blade, calams no em, but hes still trailer-made..
droppin his mic-fast, on the run, afraid of the shame that his types-cast..**
sorry nigga, but youre the first black man to be classified as white-trash..

*beat him before
** thats types as in what he types... not his type

ONE
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Old 07-14-04, 02:32 AM   #4
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where it says server minds.. thats supposed to be sever
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Old 07-14-04, 02:37 AM   #5
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no-merits,scared hairless,tho he not a bald eagle..
couldnt change identitys for the better............
............if he played the character of smeagle..
he wouldnt be high among "vets" ona ladder in vietnam..
whys this dude rappin, his "instruments" are pom-poms..
bomb-frauds,you gassed,i light matches to biters..
want a personal ?, you belong back in the cypher..
the only way you get a win,is the votes i give to you..
yada yada yada yada..........^and i mean that literal..
you couldnt soar above par,if dropped from a plane..
and you dont have g/fs,that's explained in ya name..
wouldnt be a starter for a team,if in a dream was expected..
even in fairy tales you get neglected, and rejected..
ya rhymes trail away in memory,like washed out jeans..
hes addicted to herbs, just like crack house fiends..
stop and watch,maybe you can shake them newb habits..
you should be a trackstar,usin all them damn dashes..
ima save the worst for last, his lines are toys to play wit..
and like you said:
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Originally Posted by One-Man-Band
aint no way goliaths losin-to-david

uppin for votes
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Old 07-14-04, 03:06 AM   #6
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WHOA.. so much feeding... shit... lol... ah well..


uppin for votes

good battle man
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Old 07-14-04, 03:30 AM   #7
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i didnt feed.... you always use dashes in your verses.. that was a given lmao.. you use dashes and hyphens and shit, in every verse.. so i just anticipated it.. like i really had time to feed lol.. i dropped 5 mins later when is aw it bruh.. honestly, no feeding.. uppin tho
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Old 07-14-04, 03:50 AM   #8
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i meant feeding like... from the shit i said.. but dont worry bout it, doesnt bother me.. cant believe no-ones voted on this

uppin

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Old 07-14-04, 03:02 PM   #9
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let gooooo... lets get some votes.. leave a link and we will take a look in your battle.. get at us
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Old 07-14-04, 06:51 PM   #10
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uppin on this battle.. dont sleep ya'll.. return some votes.. leave a link
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Old 07-14-04, 07:19 PM   #11
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its pretty fucked no one has voted on this yet...


uppin
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Old 07-14-04, 08:52 PM   #12
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break down

opener:C
punches:C
flow:C
structure:C
wordplay:none
vocab:C
personals:both
closer:C
overall:calamity

i'll finish the vote when you poll on mine
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Old 07-14-04, 08:54 PM   #13
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Old 07-14-04, 11:26 PM   #14
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Uppin.. trigga, you need to expand on that explination.. cause right now, that cant be counted.. 0-0.. uppin for some more votes.. lol at how many views this got and no votes.. leave a link
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Old 07-14-04, 11:32 PM   #15
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yeah that vote confused the shit outta me.. howd we get "both" for personals when i had like 1 and his verse was full of em?

bad vote..

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