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Omg... Get Over It... The Battle Was Over... For Fucks Sake
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can we get good brake downs..............................
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Voted For: Razzle Dazzle
Opener: OMB Closer: OMB Metas: OMB Punches: OMB Wordplay: OMB Stucture: OMB Multis: OMB Flow: OMB Win: OMB I.E: ok to be honest you need to not try anymore your stucuter is weak and your obviously do not understand a decent stucturized verse with nice wordplay in it cuz you need to work on almost everything im honest here to...all you do is dick ride...you need to stop your beefing and elevate honestly no hate you hot over handled here..pz One Man Band: ok i liked your verse a whole lots nice multis in it with you flowed well, well your stucture wasent as great but who cares your verse flowed well and thats what counts right?...Yea...and then your wordplay was pretty good...and also punches...nice job with being creative...no hate to both pz |
^^^ danm son why do people like u actully go online??
u hate I.E and yet vote on hes battles? i just had some clown like u vote on one of my battles N ya all need to DIE |
parallel hates me as well...........................
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Voted For: Razzle Dazzle
I have to give this one to him I think he had better strucutre harder hits more multis vocab personals and opener-closer was better also here is how I graded it. this gay's gonna see. want violence? get ya kids away from the screen razz holdin swords in both hands, bout to put a blade through ya spleen attacks are drastic so pack ya casket, leave ya wit arms, legs n' an ass of plastic this rancid bastard bout to get blasted wit acid, till they take ya assets home in baskets get bashed with classics when we clash fists, ya gettin beat with chainsaws fuck the set up, i'll cut ya head up, fork ya mind n' eat ya brains raw mangle and cut, i'll tangle ya guts into angles n' such hangin ya ankles and nuts, forcin other men to have u spanked in the butt ya get strangled too much, warn the feds, ain't know who i'm harmin next slice ya limbs nice and thin, to extend my collection of arms n' legs 15/18 razzle its like this, wit flames your flesh is obliterated from pain-inbeded... ive been self trained-to-shred-it, so your blood from your vain-is-shedded... its drained i take-tha-credit, i start your body shakin... niddles stimulate like "intercoarse" N infect ya body till ya Bold like cancer patients.... *ha* razzle i'll squeez ya lungs, N ram a vacum-hoes in ya befor we see How-Much-U-SUCK... get ready 4 a quick lace'in, cuz "Truthfully" i'll stab at ya bladder 2 help Spill-Ya-Gut's... razzle head like a Deck-Chair i'll fold-ya-dome, ya style "old filth" coverd in mold-N-foam.. i'll Chop off ya Balls N hand them to u, So u can Hold-Ya-Own.. *ouch* 12/18 hit up on my link peace. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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