Voted For: CriTiC

Supervillian:
your stucture was alright but not as great as expected your imagery was alright coulda been ebtter vocab was pretty damn weak the emotion was ight but coulda been way better the flow was ight coulda been better but really work on creativty and write to amuse others not just to be ya know, pz

Critic:
well you overal had better everythign but i was really feeling your nice vocab great imagery the stucture was super great the emotion was so good and the flow was flawless ahha, if there is ever a topical touney and theres partners or somin i want you to be mine. but keep doin ya thing and get my pm its parallel pz

RTF in my battle with speats links in the sig

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Already vote in battle as Parallel.

Voted For: CriTiC

nice drops on both sides.

critic. i really felt your structure and word play.. you had really good vocab and eveything went smooth. niiiiice job on this one.. .. i liked yours so much because it was honest and it was real.. nice vocab. metas. and rhyme scheme

supervillain.. also a very nice drop .. only thing was ur lines were to stretched which affected the overalll flow.. critic had a really good flow.. your structure was off key.. otherwise a very nice drop .. it just didnt have all the honesty that critics did

nice drop on both parts

Vote//Critic

SV you yonked my victory, haha thats not a dick ride vote man
but it's kool up~ing

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^^^this ones for you crit.....lol.....UPPIN'!!!^^^


s.v.

ha ha shit I didn't relize it was the same person voting good call
sorry hungover yesterday,...

Uping !!!

Uping for close for the love of god!!! Come on now people show a nigga
some luv...

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Voted For: CriTiC

blah both came really weak.. i mean supervillains lines were about 2.3 miles long.. his structure was way off flow was lacking.. and i wasnt really feeling the story line on either, both lacked imagery.. but CriTic did have some nice emotion thru out his.. but Crit dont over vocab ur verses shit sounds mad played, and it really doesnt fit well for a topical.. but due to the emotion factor i gotta give this oen to CriTic.. no hate just voting honest...