alright then . 10-7 so far...
all votes are respected...
and give thanks to all
of those who have voted
on this topical...

thanks alot

-Sureal

Originally posted by WhiteRap19
Aight. I read this shit over and over. I liked both of the verses. I was feeling 13th a little bit more. I think it went to the topic better. No doubt there. That was a great topic for both Emcees. Personally I think 13th took this shit easily. He rode on the topic with out getting off of it. His whole thing had my attention.

Vote= 13th Disciple
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^^^exactly both of yalls was tight..but i got agree with exactly whiterap said....

i was feeling both of them but the one that caught my attention more was sureals, i htink his was more complex and better, nice shit

vote=sureal


can yall go vote on my battle at
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0525#post550525

iight thx
holla,

-Purple Haze

ok 11-8 so far.... now this is Me UPPING it for some votes...

thanks alot

Ok i peeped both battles Three times.......and it was damn close....Good story on both parts ..well told and Everything ..but i had to vote for one and to me 13 edged it out on the vocab .....that was some heavy usage of words......which gave the story a very complex feel to it.....

vote=13

11-9.....appreciate all the voters............going on till tomorrow night....keep em commin....this is what i call a close battle......1

they were both harsh, i could feel this was some harsh shit to come out and say. i have read both of yalls other stuff b4 and I dont think that this was either of you'z best. it was kinda of weak in a strong way. yet kids kill themselves everyday and dont really take the time to think about it yet grownups killing their child is another, people dont come up and talk about that everyday like they do homocide or suicide
vote-13

11-10 ... this ones gona be a nailbiter for both me and 13th...

great luck dawg...

these were two great stories....really fun to read but over all 13ths hit me harder...i love the way his stories are based on real life occurences....it makes them more emotional

vote=13

alright, 11-11 ... shit this is comin real close down to the fuckin wire.... make sure you actually read both verses before voting, and make sure you are not a hurb before voting.... thank you to all past and future voters...

good battles guys i cant vote cuZ im new


Mad Man: Then why did you post?

Ok, Yes, this battle was pretty close, 13th came with a nice take on the topic, good storyline, vivid imagery and very descriptve at times, you gave a nice insight into the killers other side, nice touch.

Surreal came good too, very nice story, great emotion and imagery, again, you held me captive til the end of your verse, and the multi's helped too with the flow etc.

In the end it came down to personal preference i guess, two good takes on the topic, both had nice imagery and emotion but i was leaning more towards Surreal, his just got me into the story more and kept me hooked. Nice battle though guys, neither should get disheartened with the loss here.

Vote: Surreal.

VOTE - SUREAL

REASON - I juss thought his verse came together more...flowed better, etc...both were ILL verses, don't get me wrong...but liek sed earlier in dis thread, it wuz sureal's endin that sealed tha deal...

PEACE

alright, 13-11 ... thanks alot for the enormous response to my verse...and for all of the votes that have been directed towards both parties (13th and myself)

ok this battle waS HIZZZELLAAA TIGHT i read sureals 3 times n 13th's 2 times
AND IT TOOOK HELLA LONg lolol

but it was worth it but i felt 13ths alot cuz he stayed on topic tha whole time n he has a nice story lololol

sureals whas tight also i liked it i read it a 3rd time cuz it was so close but in some places i didnt like it but its coo

my vote:13th cuz he had a nice spit n STAYED ON TOPIC THE WHOLE TIME ALOT OF PROPS TA YA KID NICE WORK

alright, 13-12 ....

this shit is close...

I am totally blown away by both emcees, I mean both came hard and fast, but I was feelin 13th flow mroe then Sur, so my vote is 13th.

Vote-13th

Okay heres what I thought...

13th had me interested through out the whole verse, I wanted to finish it instead of reading the first couples bars. I could imagine his verse with ease, his vocabulary and detail was definitly a HUGE plus in getting him this vote...

Sureal was also very detailed but I felt like it was cut off, the ending was very well written but I didnt feel the alter ego/insane part of the person through out your whole verse like I did in 13th..

In topical I feel image is such an important part off the verse, because when you loose your audiences attention then you wont gain it back.. 13th kept me intrigued..Sureal had me at the end but the begining took to long I feel.

Vote: 13th Diciple

yings vote should not count... he joined this month ... did not explain well.. and ... who cares about the flow.. its not about the flow... its about the structure of the verse and the words within...
no hate towards 13th, but i will fight this one...

should be 13-13...

i know you would say same if you were in my spot right now...

but i would fight this one ... even if you were ahead like 16-2...

cuz its not well explained at all , and he's a hurb...

If Agreed, then votes are 13 - 13

But If You Want His Vote, Take It... - Sureal

I think Sureal won this becuz I felt he had better control of the topic, and what his subject did. Although 13 was more decriptive, but I like the way Sureal expose the various positions.

vote- sureal

w/e ... 14 - 14...

you can count that hurbs voteif you want...

so .... yea ... close as fuck battle...

i think it should be 14-13... but i dont wana steal a vote from you...

so 14-14 .... UPPIN THIS SHIT...

OK WE NEED ONE MORE VOTE TO FINISH THIS OFF!

WE ARE DEADLOCKED AT 14 - 14

ok ... uhm its past midnight.. so this is closed...

but we are dead locked at 14-14...

I have to give my boy 13th disciple props on his killer verse...

We both came fuckin ill... (this is in RB Legends, link in my sig)

I Guess, Mad Man Can Decide How To Award This...

-Sureal

(NO MORE VOTES ALLOWED)

deadlocked......it is what it is......good battle..........................its up to mad man what to do.....cuz i got two unexplained votes and all i guess.......whateva....do ur thang mad....................................

Ummm......Sudden Death....Whoever gets the next vote wins. I'll keep my eye on it.

Congrats to both MC'... both were written extremely well... this one was tough to call cause you both flipped the topic nicely and you both had some really tight imagery.... i dont feel like going into specifics because so many have already.... im not gonna leave it a tie... so .... imma say that 13 edged Sureal out by Midgets pubic hair... Dope battle... Peace

Vote 13

fuck..

Im Gona Go Get All Votes

i will post how everyone voted and shit in a sec

my vote ges to sureal....everyone else said what i wanted to say but witht he new rule i have to say it again

13= Your verse didnt realy appeal to me...the killing the kid at the end really didnt clikc in my mind

Sureal= Though ours coiuldve been better too, but the ending resolved it all

vote= Sureal

Mad Man - Vote Sureal .. Well Explained.
Chrit - Vote Sureal .. Quoted Mad Man, Then Voted Sureal.
WhiteRap19 - Vote 13th .. Explained.
Vendetta - Vote Sureal .. Quoted Mad Man, Then Well Explained.
X Ecution - Vote 13th .. Quoted Whiterap, Then Voted 13th.
Ill-Mental- Vote Sureal.. Well Explained.
Treach P - Vote Sureal .. Well Explained.
H4iKu - Vote 13th.. Well Explained.
ThuG WhytE - Vote Sureal .. Very Well Explained.
G UNIT BROOKLYN. Vote 13th. Not Explained Well.
Cin Ladin. Vote 13th. Well Explained.
Addlib - Vote Sureal ...Explained
Evil_SoLo - Vote Sureal .. Well Explained.
Younggadget - Vote Sureal.. Explained
KerrDezzy - Vote 13th , Not Explained Well
~RuthLess~ -Vote Sureal, Quoted ThuG WhytE
Chyna Doll - Vote 13th , Not Well Explained.
Xplicit - Vote 13th, Quoted WhiteRap19
Purple Haze -Vote Sureal - Not Well Explained
Bribeone1 - Vote 13th - Explained
Teeny - Vote 13th - Explained
Irrelivance - Vote 13th - Not Well Explained
Camarac -Vote Sureal - Explained
SreetLegend-Vote Sureal - Not Well Explained
TheHandsOfGod- Vote 13th - Explained
Ying - Vote 13th - Not Well Explained
TriX - Vote 13th - Explained
Pair-A-Dyce - Vote Sureal - Not Well Explained

Two After Closed
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Evolve - Vote 13th - Explained
A2Z - Vote Sureal - Explained

With All Votes That Should Be Taken Off And Including The Two Votes From Evolve and A2z The Final Score Should Be
12-10 for me ...

and without evolve or a2z's votes should be 11-9 for me...

i think its an unjust win for 13th , as you can see above ... you can go back and check all the votes if you want 13th and mad man , and i think you will agree with all the Explained and Non Explained Votes...

- Sureal

And If You Want We Can Take Away All Of The Quoted Votes Also ..

Still Makin It 9-8 For Me ...

Cuz i do not think quoted shit should count... they should explain it theirselves... so taking away all of the non explained and quoted votes and Including Evolve and A2Z's It Should Be 9-8 ...
Not Including The Two After Time Votes... Should Be 8-7 for me...


-Sureal

I will talk to Sand about this. Either he will decide if your point is valid, or in any case, cast the tie-breaking vote. In the meanst time, this battle is...
CLOSED!

you both lose...fuckers...:)

Sureal Wins, Due To More
Explained Votes...Problem?

Pm Me...pz!