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This was feedback posted for DocC
 

Yo Wat Up Man I Take It You Dont Like Terror2005
He Aint Shit Cb83

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Voted For: Terror2005

you had better punches
but there is still room for elevation

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Voted For: Terror2005

Lololmao Kam Has Wierd Style...
Everything Relates To Other Music But It Was Actually Pretty Tite...
But Aiight Here's The Quick Breakdown:

Flow: Kam
Punches: Kam
Wordplay: Kam
Personals: Docc
Opener: Kam
Closer: Docc

Aiight Ya, Kam's Flow And Punches Were Just More Consistant And I Just Liked Them Alot Better...
But Ya Here Are Some Of The Highlights:

Docc:
is this bitch retarted he posted a sig request in the wrong forum
he must be mad after all his losses, he probably visits a sanatorium
Nice Little Personal In The First Line And Then The Second Finished Up Nice With Some Pretty Dope Wordplay. I Was Feeling That.

uh slangs? yeah okay, this bitch has never seen the macs heat
runnin a marathon was the last time he ran the fuckin streetsIts Actually A Pretty Played Punch, But I Dont Care I Thought It Was Pretty Dope And It Flowed Pretty Nice.

Kamikazee:
wow, I must be lucky, I won the bid, to murder this kid,
You better start plannin ya funeral like Tupac did
Nice Smooooth Punch Got The Point Across. Hott Little One Two Hit The Way The First Line Settup The Second Perfect, I Liked That.

Your future is death, so time fo dis herb to switch modes,
Tell Bone Thugz I said Wut up, when you at the crossroads
I Like This Aswell, Again You Set Up The Punch Nice In The First Line And Fallowed Up With Nice Wordplay In The Second To Give An Overall Hott Punch.

Pack ya shit, ya whack, you just needa leave town,
ya career is like kanye west with the way it all falls down
Haha Again Mayn, I'm Feeling This. The Whole Concept Of The Kanye Video Was That Fem Packing And Leaving And You Set Up The First Like That And Then Brought Kanye Into It With A Nice Finisher. Overall My Favorite Line Of The Batter, Crazy Shit.

Overall This Was A Good Battle Kam Just Slightly Took It With The Punches And Easily Had Better Flow...
Good Job Both Of You...

And I'd Apreciate It If You Could Return The Favor By Checking My New O.M.:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170702

Thank Alot And Pretty Good Battle Overall...
.One.

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