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Kingz 05-15-04 04:25 PM

You always come soft, in the midst of everything that you do
Yo, I’ve wiped my ass… wit toilet paper that’s harder than you
7/10 funny shit. solid punch with humour
Wanna end my losin’ streak, lol, you make me wanna laugh
You said it so correctly wit yo quote, “I’m such a dumbass”
^(AIM Conversation)
7/10 good personal, didnt hit all that hard tho
“Fashos” you are my bitch… I even got you makin’ beats for me
After this battle is concluded, “weerd”, I’ll have you kissin’ my feet, you see?
^(His AIM lingo lol)
7/10 another good personal, hit fairly hard
You probably have a lot of Deadly Visionz, cuz you’re affected by a curse
The only think Murderous about your Methodz, is how you kill your OWN verse
9.5/10 hot shit
Man, we used to be cool, but I'ma betray you... jus like Treason
Cuz you deliver shitty ass verses. Now THAT's 'The Reason'
5/10 hmmmm not feeling it
Hmm… L.I.… there really WASN’T a good meanin’ for that
But after this battle is through… it’ll be acknowledged as the Loser Impact
6/10 iight closer

Shit i aint gonna lie, ya got skills, yeah compared to fuckin herbs...
People know ya wack, ya couldnt take action if ya name was a verb...
iight 6/10
u Battle people who slacked off, barely beat em, but walk round all cocky…
Look your wack, Our skill level gap is larger than kids smiles who play hockey…
6/10 hmmm wasent feeling it
Weak and weary fall first, permanantly remember how i knocked ya...
And have this bitch beggin for life more than Frankenstein's docta...
8/10 hit hard
C this herb is my bitch, i have him crawling and beggin at my feet...
Keep ya tongue in ya mouth, cause your the one who's buyin my beat...
6.5/10 ok personal
So quit runnin ya mouth and realize that your win streak was a fluke...
Killed by ya own weapon, look down the left, same as u did to yung duke...
iight closer 6.5/10

vote spul, overall better verse

L.I. i liked the input of the AIM convo, dope idea

SPuL™ 05-15-04 11:02 PM

aiight, thanks for votin'. Uppin' for one more vote

virt 05-16-04 01:25 AM

ok nice drops by both emcees yall did it real tight

LI-you came good in the begining and then you feed off his verse...that is a no no. You have good punches and structure

bestline-original
Shit i aint gonna lie, ya got skills, yeah compared to fuckin herbs...
People know ya wack, ya couldnt take action if ya name was a verb...

good start off

worsteline-you feed
C this herb is my bitch, i have him crawling and beggin at my feet...
Keep ya tongue in ya mouth, cause your the one who's buyin my beat...

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spul-Punches flow average personals overall good perfomance

bestline-
You always come soft, in the midst of everything that you do
Yo, I’ve wiped my ass… wit toilet paper that’s harder than you

i think i herd it befor but maybe im trippin...but good punch

worsteline-
I had no love for the second line about the aim conversation it was stupid...and im too lazy to go to the first page and get it...

LI

open-9
punches-8
flow-7
structure-9
consitant verse-8
vocab-9
creattivity-9
close-7
overall-8
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spul-
open-7
punches-9
flow-9.
structure-9
consitant verse-8
vocab-9
creattivity-9
close-9
overall-9

vote~spul
no hate


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