Hmm... Both of your verses lacked from what i saw... DON your verse lacked any stucture whatsoever... So u lose... Capital... I like to see more Personals... Seemed a lil played out... But you win cause you tried to make your lines neat...

poll vote on that one battle, i upped it...

anxiety that vote is bullshit uppin this battle.....

uppin this ish fo my boy don

aight this was a pretty close battle... good over all battle and i was feelin both of your verses, both had good drops.... don had slightly better structure and rhyme scheme but on the other hand State had better punches and personals... punches and personals are what really wins battles and his flow was really on lock... im gonna go with state on this one but no hate to don... this was a close fuckin battle and a good one....

VOTE- STATE

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Don- nice drop dogg....you had some nice punches and some nice personals...
struc was aight and your flow was good....overall a nice verse just hit a little
harder with punches..

overall:7.0/10

State- ok nice drop but to me you didnt hit as hard in this battle as others
and you lacked in personals....the only thing working for you was your struc
and your flow was ok..

overall:6.5/10


vote-Don