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I gotta come in here an break it down lol./.
I gotta give DaClassic my vote because i think his verse was pretty good..he used some good multies and punchlines and some ok wordplay...shadow ur sturc threw me off in the begging...thinking i was reading the text format and color lol..nah tho...but it was an hott verse both of ya dropped but.....daclassic urs was i think skin better.....shaodw u had some good sturc some ok wordplay and O.K...punchlines..daclassic punches i think hit a little more better because it think they were a bit more complexed....iight nough sayed.. Vote-DaClassic. |
By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts
This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut 5/10...wow, s-t-r-e-t-c-h-e-d Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator 7/10...decent A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze 6/10...weak.. The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence 5/10..weak, didnt rhyme Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside 5/10...no punch... overall - 5.6...weak...1 good line Long time in the making? Best savor these moments No wait… its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance 7/10...nice punch It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you 6/10...not feelin[/b We both know, I’m straight better battle wise Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize [b]7.5/10...nice My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated 7.5/10..nice, really liked this. no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest 8/10...i dont care, this was a fuckin ill punch overall - 7.2...wow, punches killed this cat.. v/se |
By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut 6/10 Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator 6/10 A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze 5/10 The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence 7/10 Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside 7/10 Ya punches were not tha hardest but they connected and got the job done ya personals were sorta hidden but i picked them out and found em and ya wordplay was alright could of came more complex but all together a nice drop and good wordplay and good punches also benifitted Long time in the making? Best savor these moments No wait… its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance 6/10 It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you 5/10 We both know, I’m straight better battle wise Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize 5/10 My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated 6/10 no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest 7/10 U started out weak but u finished up strong at the end with the Pujoles line u coulda got the win if u had of came more persistent with tha harder punches and better wordplay but it was kinda like u dropped lazy on this one and didnt come with hard punches or wordplay.Ya personals were average and were there but like ya opponent didnt really stick out that much like they should, ya structure also was ok u could of elevated in this one Overall it was an Ok battle but my vote has 2 go 2 ~~~~Daclassic~~~ |
thanks to everyone......peace.
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aiht i thought that this was a good battle....daclassic came a lil weak but it was good...but all in all shadow came alot harder..
shadow: you came with soem heat...and it was crazy how you didnt even use one stretched line they were all short in sweet...lol but you could have used alot more personals and a lot more punchlines but your meta4s were aight...you need to work on that though...good battle you prolly could have used alil more time to post this...seemed like oyu were in a hurry..you didnt even get to bold your lines...lol but yeah good battle...all in all 8/10 daclassic: alot of strectched lines ...how come when you battled me you came with so much heat it could of caught hell on fie...lol but yeah you could have also used alot more meta4s and alot more punchlines..the personals were kinda weak thouhgt,...i just expected more from you.....all in all 6/10 good battle vote=shadow Switched |
yeah....because that's when I didn't care on how my verse was ......at that time I was thinking about leaving the site....but uh I think you should change your vote because you voted for me on accident....I'm just keeping it real...and being fare.
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v/ SE
He had witty punches...hs closer was nice...better wordplay...more complexity...links are worn out and played out...daclassic ive seen u come better...=\...se took this |
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