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Wordz AhGod 07-25-04 10:19 PM

Heres my answer to ur diss to me in ur puss ass lil thread homie.

I laugh at Ur attemps, and Im unshook by Ur "feelings"/
I'll bring so much heat...Ur fucking skin'll start pealing/
U aint a battle rapper, Ur hardest written lines get pissed on/
Ur styles commercial like 5 minutes in between a cit~com/
and I'll str8 bomb on u like U was Yokohamas child/
My dicks like true love from the way it makes ur momma smile/
U dont want beef? every were U go, I see U misspelling my name/
but U couldnt flow curcles around me, even if U went down the drain/
My topics could pound Ur brain and ground Ur fraim...I dont know if U knew that/
But I would like for U to give Missy eliot her jumper suit back/
U aint a killa, real niggaz dont gotta explain they selves/
but I want U to write a long essay explaing while U look like an Elf/
and U should join the special Olympics from the way U run Ur disfiguered mouth/
the only way Id have to pop the trunk on U...is to toss Ur body out/
and U could never bite my style or copy my lines/
Ur too addicted to swollowing 9's and borrowing D12's rymes/
tell Ur possie of misspunctuated punk bitches that Im coming to see em'........while they sleeping/
going down all they fucking chimmanies wit reasons to stop they breathing/
This jewish run DmC wannabe cant fuck wit a lyricacist/
but in a few minutes...ALL his d/riding niggaz wont even excist/
I percist wit punchlines that hit hard like bare knuckle boxing wit grown men/
U cant go 10 rounds wit out the use of oxygen in ur collen/
People mistake U for my dick from the way I'll leave Ur head swollen/
U had spit U verse at me from a speeding vehicle cuz 80% of it was stolen/

GunzGalore 07-26-04 11:39 AM

Eye: Punches were hittin. Flow was nice with a good structure. They way u put his quote in there from another battle brought it home. Keep it up homie

Raw: You had punches but they jsut want landin. Lines were stretched and I couldnt get into the flow like I did with Eye. But I could tell where u was comin from I just couldnt catch da flow u had obviously. It seems as if u had no motive in that freestyle just random punch lines here and there.

But 2 say da least it was still a good battle. Big up's 2 da both of ya!
Keep at it fellas

Check me out....http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137344

raw killa 07-26-04 12:44 PM

first off eyedentdy i spell ur punk ass name rite every time n dats ur answer back 2 my shit?lmmao dat shit fuckin sucked compare 2 my call out rhyme get a life grow up or sumtin like xxxtasy said it stats clearly in da rules no beef yet u instagated it like u wanted sum dont b mad u've met ur match n dis whitie actually got talent n for u morons who dont undastand my drawn out lines picture speed rapped like twista cuz i do is run "tracks" past u fuckin idiots(eyedentdy) but every1 who left an honest opinion good looks n thank u holla back n stay up

raw killa 07-29-04 02:58 AM

ayt we need votes 1 more for either who will come out dis battle da winne who kno's c'mon people we need ur honest votes no more crew shit sum who know's neither of us n will give an honest opinion n vote peace uppin ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

killa skillz 07-29-04 03:08 AM

i think raw killa got this he got this battle he go batter punchlinesand over all its bettar

Wordz AhGod 07-29-04 12:32 PM

we need one more vote on this to get it done wit. wether I win or loose, this was good for me. I was just begginning to get bored wit this site. thanx raw

SixX da FinisH 07-30-04 10:44 AM

ayo tha boi who said raw was bitin d12 was rite.. got tha bar rite here:

"As a youngin I was beat for just livin
Cross dressed just to get thrown in the womens prison
I guess i was just dressed to be a hoodlem
being pressed cause the stress that cause the ridelin"

damn i aint battlin u if u bite son..

~1~

-NERVEZ- 07-30-04 04:13 PM

eye won this battle..he had better wordplay. he had good punches and also had better personals thrown in there..raw kill-nice try homie but really think u came up short on this one you lackd the smack in yo punch you feel me you had a good structure though.Also try an manipulate sum of those words better
v/eye

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