no limit to how many bars, we spit at the same time. shits do 30 mins after check in atleast. no crew hate dr, biting votes, no feeding. U do any of this and U'll get dQ'ed wit out warning. Lets do this, Keep it HipHop. no beef afterwardz.

Heres my check..... Im gonna drop soon, just give an extra 2 mins cuz Im setting it up.

__________________
figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

This nigga dont wanna spit, his girl did it all for em/
writes garbage then cries cuz nobody reads his Forums/
I'll ramsak his backpacking rap act in seconds/
then cut meat out Raw killas beef for me like a C-Section/
U dont kno about battles, But I'll school U in war/
Iv forgoten more about rap then u could ever ask for/
I aint a vet, so why ya'll niggaz got chin checking animals/
Id bite Ur rymes just to leave Ur style mangled/
Bitting me'll poison Ur record quick/
got U visiting Ur verse's hospital bed while breaths it last spit/
thiis nigga wish he could ride my dick, thats to say the least/
U might as well send me another message saying

I'll give U a heart attack that'll leave war moments as flash backs/
but fuck It, cuz Iv been looking for something to laugh at/

So spit......

__________________
figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

U ever gonna drop? U told me to set it up and even sent me the congrats on my victory. It dont take that long to write a verse nigga. c'mon kid.

__________________
figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

ayt son u want daddy dat bad 2 teach u da un writin rules of battle rap fine im back sry been up 4 a few days straight but ayt ill spit good luck when da votes come in ayt ima drop it now

__________________

yo who dis cat eyedentdy,dis nigga aint spillin raps he writin symphony's,
now sit down n listen,when ya daddy teachin a lesson,n c if u complete da testin//
u think those half ass lines'll work,betta off sellin ya mom on ebay 2 see her worth//
when it comes 2 battlin cats,i get'em comin out da closet like 1 of eminem's raps//
i attack da keyboards,when takin trash like u out like it was part of my chores//
drop da mic n admit it,u cross dress jus 2 get in women's prisons u fruity bitch//
battlin u is like eminem 2 vanilla ice,cuz every1 knows,when i kick flows they nice//
wit des words n my mic im takin ur soul,ya givin da studio frostbite cuz u comin off cold//i contravene,ur veins,into ya brain,givin u migrains,kill da mic make sure u feel its pain//i told cats b4 dis aint a battle its a privelege,cuz i stay on top of da flow like dishwasher liquid

__________________

ayt eyedentdy da shit done good luck again when da votes come peace out

__________________

come wit da votes now every1 dont hesitate look us out oh n i kno kid damn relax its jus music peace

__________________

after syphony's i meant 2 // so yea hit us up we need votes

__________________

I could get U DQ'd for biting D12's rymes homie. but I dont think I'll need that. If I ever see this again in any of Ur battles, Ur gonna get Dq'd and possibly banned. lets get these votes in now.

__________________
figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

lol ur funny man really ive got all eminem's,d-12's,royce da 5'9'' cds n none of da shit i wrote is biting n e of d-12 lines im nota biter jus a ill writer but w/e lets get these votes like u said

__________________

D12 Devil's Night CD. devils night track #16 3rd verse in the song I think. Kanivas verse

Cross dress to get thrown in the womens prison/
I guess I was just dressed to be hoodlem/
cuz stress and ridlin coused those cops feelings to be hurt after they saw wat I did to those children/

something like that....still think Im kidding? I kno my shit.

__________________
figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

Eye:ya verse had good flow and some nice raw punches, also had some good personals there,ya opener was funny and you stayed tight all the way thru, overall good spit man, structure was on point to
Raw:you had some good punches and some decent lines, but ya structure needs a little cleaning up, then ya flow will be betta, but overall not bad from either..
VOTE: EYE

__________________
"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI"

O Y D

*FluidMusic*


*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*

ayt why only 1 fuckin vote come on shit vote dis thing i dont care if i win or lose i want see peeps feedback goddamn ya'll lazy 2 type or sum shit cuz i kno u peeps have read it so drop a reply vote 4 it c'mon wake up up up up up^^^^^^^^^^^^^thank you

__________________

raw killa is the shit and will take out eyes eye with his rhymin. eyes will pop out.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

__________________