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Old 08-19-04, 01:45 PM   #1
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Invader_ZIM vs raw killa

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Battle Rules:

only use recycled stuff
unlimited lines
one line from each battle
use as many battles as u want
no biting





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Old 08-19-04, 01:46 PM   #2
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Invader_ZIM has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 01:46 PM.
 
Old 08-19-04, 01:47 PM   #3
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your names shitty to beggin wit''
i know all yr verses are rit''

your problems are phsycologicall''
yr scared so u hide in your follicel''

oh and follicel means cacoon''
just thought id tell ya''
ya know dont wanna over heat your brain so soon''

i dont wanna kil ya''
just let y aknow you were a some one''
till i drilled ya''

you rappin liek you got somethin to say''
well then say it bitch i aint got all day''

you act all tough, wut''
battle you? bitch your lucky i dont beet you up''

your quick to pick up that knife''
shit an di though u liked life''

here ill slow down and let you gather your lyrical sence''
oooo the supence, ya right and guandi was intence''

hey put the dictionary away''
we know u sux its ok''

you spittin liek you mad''
that whole verse and you didnt even land a jab''

i didnt wanna kill ya''
just harshly drill ya...but oh well
 
Old 08-19-04, 02:54 PM   #4
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raw killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 02:54 PM.
 
Old 08-19-04, 03:23 PM   #5
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this niggaz throwin punches like a parkasins diseased muhamad ali/dis guys an artist dis nigga as much of a gangsta as dat new HBO comedian ali g/(from dis cat lawless hitman squad from dis otha site)

im strapped wit "sharp" penz dat bleed liquid lead/on note pads by "mead"/rhythms i spit cause worse "harlem shakes" than niggaz runnin bein filled wit lead/til da quake of a man's heart stops n lays out dead/from dis battle wit dis cat skotz from dis otha site)

invader_zim is lyrically inclined/so i let him take a bite of mine/at least then he can truly read-it-n-weap at da battle's startin line/i give words black eyes when i "punch" a-line only time/dis nigga comes close 2 "bark-in" is when he writes on "pine"/from my battle wit dis cat killa jones on dis otha site)

battlin me is like aids n white blood cells...cuz winnin will neva happen/ya rhymes r 2 weak 2 rely on rappin/drop ya pen n step away from da mic/save ya self from bein murdered 2nite/
n jus listen 2 da dj in da back scratchin/cuz condoms da only thing u rappin(wrappin)/(from my battle wit lyrical gladiator)

tha "frontline board"/post rape when i touch da keyboard/
"schema" claims he a "elevator going up" so im haltin his risin "elevator cords"/(from my battle wit schema)

time 2 put dis bitch unda da "wing"/
like a "father n son kind of" thing/ (lol)(from my battle wit I.E.)


well i wasnt exactly sure how u wanted dis done so here it is no bitin was done but all was my own recycled shit from 6 different battles hope i did shit rite...wasnt sure how u meant only 1 line cuz well then it would rhyme so yea those my fully recyled punchlines i guess wait 4 u now.......peace n good luck.....oh i neva done a battle like dis always jus been str8 forward so yea......holla back wun
 
Old 08-19-04, 07:48 PM   #6
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This was feedback posted for raw killa

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my man killed it with this one...nice punches, flow, everything...keep it up dawg and keep droppin

my vote would go to raw killa, but i aint got 20 posts yet...shit is fucked...
 
Old 08-20-04, 06:13 AM   #7
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thanx 4 da love ill return it fo sho n dont worry u cant vote yet shit kool uppin dis piece wun luv im out
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Old 08-24-04, 06:14 AM   #8
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yo people i kno u see dis battle fuckin vote for it n help us close this sad chapter of murked.....lol uppin dis bitch cmon will return da favor jus leave a link
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Old 08-24-04, 12:41 PM   #9
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This was feedback posted for raw killa

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yo if it was up to me dis battle wud go to raw killa but to bad im in his crew o well, but uh yea honestly i think dis shit goes to raw hahahah u suck ivader Zim, naw jp yall id good
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Old 08-24-04, 12:46 PM   #10
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Voted For: raw killa

raw killa took this hands down...flow was there, punches, multies, awsome word use in some of the lines, was creative to even tho it was all recycled shit....this is the first battle ive seen like this...so my vote goes to raw killa because it was better
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Old 08-30-04, 05:14 AM   #11
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This was feedback posted for raw killa

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yall both need to elevate and focus more but youre gettin there
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Old 09-05-04, 03:29 AM   #12
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Voted For: raw killa

rawkiller merked this cat
flow: raw
punches: raw
metas: raw
multi's: raw
stucture: raw
v/raw this gy got merked by raw lol
return the favour in my battle vs schrema the link is in my sig thanks peace
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Old 09-17-04, 01:47 AM   #13
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Voted For: raw killa

in vader zim that is one of the worst verses i've ever heard in my life man seriously raw killa wins it by a landslide he had better everything!!!!
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Old 09-17-04, 07:42 AM   #14
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Voted For: raw killa

rawkilla even though he had bad structure he at least pulled off a couple decent punches unlike the other verse,invader you gotta legthen your lines n try ta structure your punches your verse was lackin in every catagory here....
overall i give my vote 2 rawkilla 4 better punches..
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 09-17-04, 08:09 AM   #15
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Voted For: raw killa

aiiiiight
both had string points n both had weaknesses...
rawkilla, ya structure let u down, on some parts i failed to see where the rhyme was? ...but the punches you landed were kinda hard, an ya personals hit harder...
nice drop, u got my vote............................

ZIM, ya structure was better than killas, but in some places you rhymed usin 3 bars, which is a no no in battles (as i've learned from losing battles in the same way)
ya lacked punches, ya wordplay was nice, but ya punches lacked, improve on that mayn...
ya had harder vocab, but u lacked ppunches, which rawkilla bought to the battle, so on the basis he had hard hittin punches, i gotta give the battle too him, no hate tho..

just keep elevatin

return the favor ya'll..

p e a c e
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