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upin 4 votes pleeeeaaaassse
have a heart n explaine |
Voted For: Typical
lol you took it puches word play structure, meta's vocab, personals everything else went to... typical i wont comment on intensify effect cuz he aight drop a vote on mine http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=148516 one more needed to close the bitch |
more feed back here, ok ur word play was much stronger, you had a lot of good words in the rap, and u kept it up through out the whole time, punches kept comin and u never let up, also u had good structure, which made it a lil easier to read
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Voted For: Typical
Typical -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out.. intensify -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho.. |
Voted For: Typical
Effect? What Te Hell Was Your Verse Man? I'm Not Even Gona Say Nothin Cause I KNOW You Can Do Better..! Typical, Ya Killed This Battle U Got It In The Bag, Few Alrite Lines I Guess... If Effect Would Have Took This Seriouslly, He Wouldda Had This One In The bAG Return The Favor p e a c e |
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