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10-Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no feeding
no sucking

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-09-04 at 10:05 PM

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Typical has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 10:06 PM.

its a mcflurry!
bring it!



if u tryin to test, nigga... I accept/
i murk tha best, wit intensified effect/
get beat to death, dont even think about submishin/
u couldn't touch my flow if u held my dick while i was pissin/
c'mon intensify, i leave niggas in intensive/
n yes its best to die, cuz tha pain 'ill b relentless/
nigga i rhyme divine, wita iron mind/
u claim to b nice but u 5 n 9/
so stop tha presses, evry body got addresses/
but ur nowhere to b found, cuz u got tha message/

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 11:54 PM.

shit its almost ova,
danm u a fag
who wont show
oo no
im dieing
no im lieing
fuck it its ova
yea peety much ova

^^^ my bad that wasnt my real-verse hahaha.....

that was my high-ass fucking around...

aight but here come the pain......


warning..... all rookies leave the area.... warning..... let this is ya first and last lesson.....

u see u aint up to par, not even a long-drive
so stop playing, cuz ya punches need a stronger strive
danm as time pass-by, ya life line seems shorter
cuz i make doller's, u 24 pennys starv'in for a quater
all i need is 5 bars, to have u dout'in the win in a few minutes
i've been easy, so if i cut u more slack u probley could go bungee jump'in with it
just forget it, im better admit it, or toss the white-towl and quit it
im so commit'ed, that my raps are tight.... i even battle the space between my head- N fitted
i cut necks, grip teach , snatch then rip-check's
the cash i get next, cuz all ya punhe's come short like a T-rex

Voted For: Typical

WORDPLAY - TYPICAL
PUNCHES - TYPICAL
MULTIES - NEITHER
VOCAB - NEITHER
OVERALL - TYPICAL

TYPICAL, YOU OBVIOUSLY WON THIS BATTLE.. YOU HAD MORE CONTENT, YOUR FLOW WAS BETTER, BETTER RHYMES AND EVERYTHING.. IT SEEMS LIKE INTENSIFY DIDN'T TRY..

PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR AND DROP IN THIS THREAD CUZ, I'D APPRECIATE IT MAN, THANX..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

I Don't Know, But Even With That Other Verse, I Think He Still Won..

no doubt sonic.

ps. now we got a fair compitition huh intensify?
now i'll get it fair n square
thanx for accepting again

i return all honest votes lets go people

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Voted For: Typical

OH man do i gotta explain dis shit.Intensify didnt even try. WOrd play goes to Typical nice rhymes. Flow goes to Typical longer lines. STructure goes to typical wit tha longer better line. but typical had dat shit.

vote on dis
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140395

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YO PEEPS BEEN COMPLAINNG, SO IF MY LINK ABOVE DON'T WORK, DROP IN THIS ON. THANX
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140340

good lookin big bAD I GOT CHU SON!

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Voted For: Typical

was that really a verse by intensify? did i miss it?
cause if that was it i want to battle that nigga now!! he is very bad at this do i have to breakdown?
ok hers how it looks
flow typ
metas typ
struct typ
really really is it necessary
typ took it

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Lets Go

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