Battle Rules:

6 - 8 max Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no hate
no d/r

Ill spit first due in 30 min.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-07-04 at 01:01 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

white_boi has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 12:36 PM.

Big Bad Wolf has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 12:37 PM.

aight where do i spit and when now that weve both accepted

In tha box were it says drop verse here not tha bottom box...hurry up you runnen outta time

man im takin my time to make sure that i dont choke
not like i need to this guy's a fuckin joke hes prolly an old man: gay ugly and broke. i got enough time to light up a smoke and finish it before i spit some more and just finish this cuz we all know mr. wolf aint finishin shit. i bet your prolly scared and shakin i drop rhymes like bombs and now i got this earth quakin. its crumbling before me, as i spit shit i aint takin no E. I've been off drugs for a couple months so i can take care of you puny runts who think you can defeat me but you cant cause im the most illest emcee. you better quit now before i make you look dumb 'B'


--White Boi--

When a bitch gets killed by me, everyone knows his name
U bout to die, gonna make sure you knowem like rick james
U wanna play games, how bout some hide an seek
when i find yo ass u gonna know why im heat
Lil guys real bold, talkin shit at eleven yours old
Ma wins is 5 fold,Acceptin a call out is like your soul was sold
your only in tha 5 grade, dog you eleven,
claimin to blaze gatz like 007, shit like dat introduces white bois to heaven

uppin 4 votes

oh shit what if i past the max amount of lines by 1 line?

Fuck it man jus wait for votes you did pretty good though son im supprised.

Voted For: white_boi

I'ma give this one to the youngin', his structure was better and Wolf's was a little too choppy. Both of you need to work on your punches, but aside form that either of y'all hit me up if you wanna battle.
Vote - white_boi

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Voted For: Big Bad Wolf

this obviously goes to Big BAd wolf... his rap flowed a lot better as opposed to White's which was written in paragraph form(?)... his punchlines were better because they actually took some thought. overall, everything was better in his verse...

Voted For: white_boi

dis was an ok battle .. not what i was expectin but it was aiight .. too bad wolf in my opinion white_boi took this .. i thought his verse connected more than yours ... vote White_boi

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Spitten' The Truth In Streets Of LA

Voted For: Big Bad Wolf

bIG bAD wOLF YOU GET MY VOTE MAINLY BECAUSE THIS KIDS STUCTURE WAS TERRIBLE.. YOU HAD NICE STUCTURE WITH AN EASY FLOW. RHYMES WERE OKAY, BUT YOU BASICALLY WON BECAUSE OF WHAT HE LACKED...
V/WOLF

YO CAN YO KEEP IT GANGSTA AND RETURN THE FAVOR WITH A DROP IN MINES, HERE IT IS CUZ, THANX.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

Voted For: white_boi

white boi had the best punch lines in this verse he was the one who had the better performance bestter opener and finisher aswell. It all flowed nicely together and had alot of better punches plus the word play was the better.

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