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Uppin For Votes!!~~

Uppin for votes ya'll..... I just wanna end this battle.... Bla Bla Bla...... Votes votes votes!!!~~~~~~ ..... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Upppin Uppin Uppin... For for for ~>~>~>~>~>~>~>~>~>~> votes votes votes I need votes!!!

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GOD DAMNIT GIVE ME VOTES!!! lol ... .....

Im uppin!!! For voteS!!!!

Cr4sher~~~

I got bored /\ /\ /\

Voted For: System Crasher

lol dawg i like da flow of your rap expeciaually ill piss on your lines lol

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Thanx for tha vote!!.... Uppin for votes people!!!!

Voted For: System Crasher

System got this one.......he merked the fuck out ou......ya want beef with me cuz you talkin about me in ya verse....set a battle up bitch and Brad thinkin you can beat me this time? set a battle up

Punches-The most important thing of all.....simply you can see Crasher ook it....with Platinum's wack punches.....my grandma could weave that shit...it was weak

Wordplay- I liked Crashers a lot better.....Platinums whole verse was boring.....you can plinly see Crasher took this one

Mettas- Not to be all over Crashers dick but he got this too....don't get me wrong......both of you can elevate.....alwayz room for elevating....but Crasher took this

Structure- Both of your structures was good but Crashers was a little better

Flow- Crasher's verse flowed better than Platinum's did....but Crasher could elevate in this a lot......so can Platinum

Vocab- Platinum......you got this one......but Crasher's verse was all around better than yours....weak battle over all

V/ System Crasher

return the favor......here is the link to my battle

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=148164

just copy and paste that into your adress bar where you type www.whatever.com lol

Platinum.......want another flipped 7 on your record? (7 flipped is an L 7L) talkin shit about me.......you talk about me.....watch what comes out ya mouth......i'll merk the shit out of you......set a battle up......no how about me and Crasher here against you and whoever you choose.....i fnno......what ever ya want.....but i'll merk you either way......so keep my name ou ya rhymes unless you glorify me.......bitch........sorry for freepostin Brad

LMAO u voted for him cuz your juz his freind.....n what tha fuk iz yo name anytwayz? OHHHH your probably his freind Ryan
LMFAO da gay fagz...
well i could take this battle to strobe if i wanted to but i aint gon do dat.. well peeeeeeeece nuccaz

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

Im Votin For PlaTinuM_, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, Both Of There Rhymes Were Okay But GPlaT Came A Lil Harder With It Tho

Voted For: System Crasher

system, i think you took this one, some ok punches, but you need to stop dissin him about sex and his family. . .its not workin ! both of y'all flows were off . . .platinum, in parts, your verse didn't make sense. your flow and structure were all over the place, system, owards the end of your battle, you were starting to lose it, some weren't really making sense either. but i think you had harder hitting punches than platinum, but both need to elevate. no hate

v/system

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

wow i ihtnk this was a pretty weak battle but i gotta go wiht platinum, cause at least he had a vage idea of wanting to battle, you hit harder than crasher, and your verse was better, you need to work on ya flow a little though...........

vote for platinum

returnt he favor
in my sig

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

platinum...decent verse...u had some good punches,multies and werd play wa good...and ya structure was spot on...

system crasher...nt a bad verse..nt the best...some of urs was a lil played an a lil childish..u had a few good punches and nice multies but u didnt hit as hard as platinum

my vote=platinum no hate

return this with a fair vote please

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