Battle Rules:

6 - 20 lines max
No Crew Votes
No Recyclin'
No Bitin'

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 09-05-04 at 09:52 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System Crasher has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 09:53 PM.

PlaTinuM_ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 09:53 PM.

So,newb, You think your platinum? Well platinum, I'm gattin' em'
Well bitch your next, I have Muscles in mah chest, and bitch I'm strappin em!!
I'll rock your world with thunder and lightning,
I piss on your lines, because your flow is frightning,
Your pussy ass lyrics remind me of boney hoes,
I will diss on you for licking dicks like fallin Dominos!
I should shit in your mouth then wash it out,
You only drink cum cause ya' heard theres a drout,
You rape your grandpa and lick your gandmas chest,
I will add you to mah' Knock out list just like the rest!
I play your rhymes like your grandma does your pussy,
I am a sraight nigga, not gay!, don't get pushy!
Yeah I'm young.. im only twelve 12 But im merkin your ass!
But i didnt fuck the 7th grade teacher in the middle of calss,
Open your mouth bitch, Hear this diss, I need to piss,
I AINT PLAYIN you aint got lockjaw I hope you thirsty bitch!!

Thweresmah verse dawg!!..
Lets get votes on this battle!!

As son as you post your verse...... ... ** looks at his watch** any time now!

this boi is now an (official-hooker)makin fast cash
u no ur rhymez iz (Articial-Rooker)ill take u down wit one smash

you best be steppin-off cause you know you cant win
after im done wit you in the streetz youll be the one wit da fuked up chin

Why tha fuck is your name (System-Crasher?) doped out name
Ill be the one knockin u out cuz i could (Fist-u-Faster) no chance of fame

da fuk this guy is gay he callin his freind Ryan booty-hooty
nigga can evan get his mom to suk his nutz shyt he on hootchie-duty

This h0e is callin sk00l (Retarded-Teacher) he da one
damn this guy iz all bout been a (Gaurded-Creature) nigga ur shyt is undone

you tha only newbest rapper in da rapworld spray u wit ma Bear Mace
now ima let you go wit one slap of swirl on ya face

I heard that mace line some where before?... ...Hmmm..??? Well, not bad besides that bear mase line?.... Upin for votes people!!

yo i didnt bite ma shyt... im new hurr didnt explore da site yet.. uppin for votez...

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me vs System Crasher

http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=147497 Me Vs ProVerse

Ok... its all good... Uppin for votes!!!

Ok ... its all good ... Uppin for votes!!!

Voted For: System Crasher

well this wasent a one sided battle but i seen better vocab in this verse so ya:
opener:3/10
closener: 5/10
metas:3/10
multi's: 8/10
punches: 9/10
v/S.C

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return the favour in my battla against mookie in my sig please and thanks peace

I voted on Ya' Battle... Uppin' for votes!!!!!!!

Crasher~~~~

Still uppin for votes people!!!!


Crasher~*~*~*~*~*~